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Rabe's Map Storage

Meh.

You've made a lot of nice details, and the overall layout is okay, but there's nothing that really stands out to me about this map. It seems like it's more a part of your single-player story that turned into a multi-player map.

I will say that the colors might be a bit much, but it is much nicer than some of your earlier space maps which tented to just be lots of grey.

Also, I found some skytexture clearly visible in-bounds. (it's on the other side directly opposite too.)

http://imgur.com/SNfNeVM

You should probably also clip the entire outside of the map to save on rendering time, especially since you can't get out there.

[Edit: I fail forever at embedding images]

"The Skyboxes, and Textures are released under CC-BY-NC-SA; ask permission to modify these files"

Yeah... no. Any CC license that does not have ND clause allows modification.

Also, please stop using NC/ND clauses, really.

I've changed the floor grate to something that looks absolutely horrendous, and removed all custom content.
До свидания и Спасибо
-P

It looks like a mall in xmass :)

Hey Pyccna,
Although I don't often, if at all comment on your maps.

I'd just like to say that your maps are coming along nicely and even though some of the criticism is harsh, keep at it! You're improving a lot, keep making maps! :D

PS: Try get the packaging and permissions to use textures right ect... because it drives some people nuts if you don't.

Good luck!
Death14

Best point of the map;
- The layout, as it flows quite well. However, like 50% of the layout is just stairs; which isn't a good thing.

Worst point of the map:
- Atmosphere, as the lighting amplifies the noisy and odd looking texturing (especially the odd looking pulsating screens make it feel weird, but also the numerous misaligned textures).
- Gameplay, as your map somehow has 12 cartridges spawning, while only 3 rockets, 4 bullets, 6 shells, 6 grenades and 8 riflerounds are scattered around inside the map.
Read this guide as the playerstarts are very bad placed among the bases and even the flag.

P.S.
You still used Rabe's details on Stahlbox as a base for your own details. Come up with your very own details instead.

The layout may be ok, those holograms are a nice idea, too,
but

- the sounds are way too loud and totally annoying

- you fail hard at aligning textures, 2 examples:

The map is full of stuff like that. Generally the textures are way too noisy.

- you fail at lighting, 2 examples:

There are a lot of white light textures without lights at all or with coloured lights. And there are a lot of lights without sources. Looks very odd.

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Rabe's Map Storage