As you can just see from the screenshot, there are plenty of improvements to do. Here are some of them:
- Textures aren't fitting each other. As example, the red floor texture changes to a grey texture which is some kind of ramp, then changing to yellow again. The ramp really looks like it's not supposed to be there because of the grey texture, which is in contrast with the red texture.
- The geometry still consist geometry mistakes, like on those roofs at the right of the screenshot. Another example of geometry which could be improved is the mountains at the centre of the screenshot. Those look pretty ugly and should be way more "round" to give a natural feeling.
- The lighting isn't natural at all. Somehow, there are a lot of lamps around the map, with a pretty bright lightsource. This isn't a bad thing, if the skybox wasn't consisting out of just 1 bright sun and the rest of the skybox, some orange colour (which kills the atmosphere even more). A good example of a lighting mistake is the blue light at the right of the screen. Why should it be there when the sun is already lighting that spot? It's actually pretty useless because of that.
That's all I can find in a short amount of time and only by viewing the screenshot...