All of your maps have a good layout, but there is a real lack of detail.

LOOK AT THESE:
Packaging
CFG FILE
LAYOUT

you guys need a lot of practice, i recommend you to see other maps in the content and use it to example.
Good layout? haha, thats not a good layout...
i dont want to give you points, still making more maps.

"The layout: a typical problem in not experiment mappers are that they makes too low, long or narrow corridors, too little and big platforms, you makes too narrow corridors in both sides..."
Also, this isnt playable.

Greetings