Hehe, it once was my plan to make this map for sauerbraten, but since I don't got the time for another project, I never started it...
Looks promising, but when I just look on the screenshot, some textures arent fitting each other very well and edges can get trimmed better...

yet me preface ive not looked at the map ingame nor am i much aware of the general schema of the red eclipse maps:
Looking from a cube pov the map is not all that great from the screenshot. The lighting seems a bit harsh in that there is too much difference between the colors. Example is the red in the lower left. You could reduce the saturation of said light to make the area flow better with the map.

The lighting is a lil hard, meaning that it does not have a good flow of blacks to white. It is either all white or dark. you can fix this by raising the ambient and lowering the brightness of the lights.

Im not sure about the rest of the map but the gemo seems a lil dull, which happens in most quake maps. I Would suggest adding more detail to unreachable areas.

Chasester

lights are indeed a little too hard at points, you should take your time to fix that blarg, but be careful not to end up with a washed up map.

Thanks for the suggestions, I'll work those into the next update.

blarg has taken me out ._.

The layout is great and fun. it's a nice remake. Just need a few improvement to get in release. The wall may have more texture variation and details. the edges and angle may be a bit more mixed with intermediate textures (like on keystone). You also used 2 textures that have height map bug, but this is my fault. I'll try to catch you on Irc. I upload it in the SVN for now.