On the tongues of stone, they were originally flat, but I thought that made it a bit too smooth, considering it's smooth everywhere else. I'll consider changing it (or at least noclipping the roughness).

Thanks for your feedback. I've taken all of it into consideration, and you'll probably see some of your suggestions when I release the next version.

Thanks!
I thought the gargoyles looked a little forlorn up there, so I gave them something to do.

As for the map being "beautiful"... I don't consider this beautiful. To me, it's a little plain... Lacking in detail and in personality. Just a collection of architecture.
We'll see about beautiful when I decide it's really and truly done... But then again, when is anything really done?

> With the gargoyles, perhaps if you are able to lower the wings so that they do not appear as ears from some angles that might help (the gargoyles almost look like elephants at times).

Hm, didn't notice that. I'll have to check that out.

> The green I feel is a little too intense in places and does not harmonise with the orange, so reducing the green intensity might give it a bit more of a mysterious/sickly feel about it while creating a harmony with the dominant orange light.

I was trying to get a good "sickly green", but couldn't find it... Nevertheless, I do agree those lights need to be turned down.

> Then see how the blue particles around the jump pads (which work well and look good btw) would go as being more violet to get a secondary triad happening colour wise (orange green and violet).

Hadn't occured to me... sounds like a very good idea. (I never really thought the blue fit that well anyway.)

> But what is it with the delayed sounds (I haven't seen that thread)?

Thread here: http://www.cubeengine.com/forum.php4?action=display_thread&thread_id=1603 .
I couldn't get it to work by myself, so I asked for help on the forum.

Thanks for the input! It's much appreciated.

>I was trying to get a good "sickly green", but couldn't find it... Nevertheless, I do agree those lights need to be turned down.

Yeah, if you reduce the intensity then the green should merge with the orange light and you should then be able to get the off-yellows/browns that give that 'puce' look. With the green so intense as it is at the moment it easily overpowers what is really diffuse orange light. If you reduce the intensity you might also be able to increase the spread a little so that the orange and green merge a little more gradually.

>> Then see how the blue particles around the jump pads (which work well and look good btw) would go as being more violet to get a secondary triad happening colour wise (orange green and violet).

>Hadn't occured to me... sounds like a very good idea. (I never really thought the blue fit that well anyway.)

I liked what you had done with the blue particle effects, my first reaction though was "What colour scheme is this fitting in with?". The yellow lights are cool as they tend to create an analogous split from the orange. The strong green (in parts) with the orange gives the indication it should be a based on a secondary triad, so the blue therefore doesn't really fit in. You really only need a hint of the violet/purple to form the overall triad. If you have ever seen David Lynch's Dune then you will have seen this colour combination put to very good use to create a very disturbing atmosphere with mainly oranges and greens and a hint of violet.

>Thread here: http://www.cubeengine.com/forum.php4?action=display_thread&thread_id=1603 .
I couldn't get it to work by myself, so I asked for help on the forum.

I ended up finding that thread and reading it - so, you were actually trying to delay the sound. I thought the problem was with the sounds not starting straight away. Seemed odd to me why the sounds should be delayed, particularly with the whispering.

> Yeah, if you reduce the intensity then the green should merge with the orange light and you should then be able to get the off-yellows/browns that give that 'puce' look.

Thanks, that should make it easier now. I kind of see what you're saying (my eyes look at it differently), and I'm about halfway there. (You are, of course, welcome to adjust it yourself and send me a copy to peruse.)
I do, however, want to keep the green identifiable with the green of the bullets.

> If you have ever seen David Lynch's Dune then you will have seen this colour combination put to very good use
Can't say that I have. Again, half-done. The way I have it now has too much blue still.
I also have to take into consideration the fact that the texture itself is blue... The license requires that any modification goes through the author first, so I'll ask him about adjusting the color.

Again, thanks for the input. Maybe now I'll get around to doing that detail work. :P

For the green lights over the green ammo, try these values:

Radius 44
Red 130
Green 101
Blue 60
(and move the lights away from the wall a little so they are nearer the corners of the ammo)
This is actually a yellow-green light - blends with the orange while still picking up the green ammo colour. Also it allows those sickly greeny/orange/browns to show through on the floor.

For the blue particles - this is not so successful due to the turquois blue on the texture, but try these colour values:

Red 9
Green 2
Blue 10

This colour could still do some playing with, but it is more harmonious with the environmental orange (and in keep with the scondary triad), just can look a little odd with the texture.

After changing these colours you will note that other colours might look too saturated now (colour being extremely relative) so you might want to (for example) knock back the orange light over the cartirdges to something like:

Radius 44
Red 123
Green 60
Blue 41
(and again move the lights away from the wall a little so they are nearer the corners of the ammo)

But, it does depend how saturated and intense you want the scene to look from a colour contrast perspective.

Ah yes, that's a very nice violet color, but maybe a little too dark... Adjust it and the light placement and it's perfect.

As for the texture, I've gotten it more or less as I want... Just need to adjust it so that the metal doesn't get channel-swapped, reduce the glow a little, and it'll fit right in. (Then I just need to get permission. :P)

I'm still not sure on the green... It seems to me much too yellow. I'm going to go with more green.

EDIT: Permission received. Now all I need to do is figure out the right combination of settings to select only the blue parts to do some channel mixing. :)