Pretty good. I think this is more a demonstration of your ability aside from a themed map, which is not bad. Flex your creative muscle and learn your style then create some good maps. I think the architecture you presented is imaginative and in the case of the bridge a bit daring. Good job on the use of lighting in each room.

I really like the smooth movement exept of the low ceilings. lots of confusing teles are not good for my little brain but they are interesting for other for sure! :> The textures are boring and lightning is somehow too mixed for me but i think its doing the cause of keeping the gameplay in priority. 4/5 from me!

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Impressive geometry. The texturing and gameplay are lacking though...

I love this map. The overdone lighting is great, helps you learn the map. Only problem is it's too narrow in some places. 4/5

This is even better than the last version, I like it. It´s still a bit tight at some places. You got my comments on the last version so Im not talking long now. Remove this clip, argh! How about adding particle 3 to those bowls one of which Im standing on in that picture?

The geometry on this map is phenominal however....

Gameplay in the map is, sorry to be brutally honest, not there.

Lighting, I feel, is way overdone. Although I render Sauerbraten in bloom so this could just be how I render the game.

Things I liked
-Lots of circles, and you minimized the use of squareness.

Things I didnt liked
-Displeased with the lighting.
-Layout....could have been better and still had your geometry in it

5/5 for looks
2/5 for gameplay
3/5 for lighting

Overall 4/5

i like the map. there are just few things that i mentioned to you in TS, that CAN be changed but i even like it the way it is now.

- good use of lighting, maybe in the circle-room a bit to bright
- very nice overall design and nice ideas in details

i´d give it a 4/5 if you weren´t in my clan, so i give it a 5/5 :-P
just kidding. as i said, i really like it.

Pros
-The lighting is very overdone... Thats a good thing, it makes the map interesting to look at and reminds me of my neon maps.
-Little details are good.
-It has allot of variety. The map is much more unique then most maps out there.

Cons
-The biggest one is probably gameplay. The layout is somewhat confusing though the stylized colors do help. Most of the hallways are too narrow and don't provide enough jumping room.
-Some of the textures don't fit well together, especially the mud/dirt used on allot of the walls.
-The lava and suicide jumppads annoy me. Dying randomly isn't fun.

Overall 4/5. The gameplay is a 3/5 but it looks so damn cool ;)
I look forward to seeing what you do next. :)
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Hehe apflstrudl, i really like your map. It shows your abilities to work with the engine and i can spot a lot of very unique and interesting ideas here (all the use of particles, combined with clever architecture, for example).

As geartrooper already said, you should use all your ideas in your next map/s, to me this map also looks more like a demo than a real DM map. ;)

Hehe, i know exactly how it is to begin a map and never really finish it, because there are new ideas for it, each day. So, it seems more being a "snapshot" of your momentary abilities to build in Sauer than a real finished, playable map. ;)

The latest changes are quite good, i must say, though the lighting still is quite overpowered and the colours are very intensive, too, but considering the fact that this is a piece of art, it should be ok :)

Clip/noclip seems fine now, too.

Ok, seems, all what's necessary has been said already, i'll rate this map

4/5, keep it up :)