Criticism first:

• The tables and chairs in the glass building, though 'necessary,' are really hard to get around/over. Try noclipping the chairs, or if you want, getting rid of the tables and making cubicles instead.
• The 'lights' along the sides of the truck inhibit sliding... those need noclip, too. Also, try adding a windshield with glass (with full shaders you can't tell theres one there.)
• The main isle in the church is a little too narrow. Once again, widen/noclip.
• Try adding a fence all the way around the map, just so people don't think they're gonna fall off.

On to compliments:

• I really like your use of lighting, although there are some rooms that need more light.
• The truck, although bland, is a nice touch.
• Gameplay looks promising. I'll go do more running around.

EDIT:
Upon more 'running around,' I have some additional suggestions. The flag in the church seems insanely fortified behind the cross-thingy; moving it in front, or better yet into a croner, would make it a little more fair. Just for fun you could put a teleport to a high balcony in that room next to the truck (good for sniping, but still exposed if you glass the balcony door.) Some of the rooms need alot more textures for contrast (ie the schoolroom with the broken ceiling); wood could do very well. During an actual game, the cube-fences will cause fps problems; there's a chainlink fence mapmodel somewhere from on of the sp maps that would help.

Sorry if this all just sounds like criticism, but I see potential in this map!

Looks interesting, and I'd love to try it, but it's one of the maps that makes my machine lock up. :(

By the way, how much of the map is visible in the screenshot? You've marked it "large (9-15)", but if that's most or all of the map, I'd say it's more of a medium. Any more than 7 and it'd start to get crowded.

I really like this map. Many good ideas, nice use of lights in many parts of the map, some of these things you´ve built are looking very interesting, for example the party room (excellent) or the building crane (looks very nice 3D), the playground and many more.

Though 11 bases are a bit much (i´d try to use 6 or max. 7, in the best spots).
What about exchanging some of the bases with GA or YA or other tactical pickups ? If they are spread well, players will have a reason to go to certain areas, and not just exploring ;)

I agree with widening some spots/areas, for example the church and the tables/chairs in the restaurant. Some spots really need some clip/noclip, too.

Another idea would be to have at least 2 entrances/exits to rooms where bases are, so that it´s not just go in - go out (through the same exit), it simply adds more tactical options for the player ;)

But all in all, a very nice first published map, and with some minor tweaking here and there, it´s surely worth a

4/5

This is a good first map. The only few gripes i have is it seems a bit to darn in some areas, also some areas are a bit cramped and hard to move around in. But with a little tweaking this would be a super map. I love the crane that must have took you some time. Keep up the good work.

Heh, .. I was always wanting to look at it - but somehow always kept forgetting;
now I got a walk-through by the man himself ... very nice.
Just my sense of humour, the way you've played with the possibilities of the octree.

I like the secrets (and semi-secrets) a lot.

Even if this shouldn't really play well online (which I don't know yet) I'm giving it full marks: 5/5!
Just because of the fun-factor - and I bet people would be allowed to use stuff in their own maps - as long as they'd credit you for the original build!

Maybe add a sound entity near all of those speakers? You've used the particles so well already, that'd be one of the last features you haven't used yet ;-)

Great fun, what a lark :)