your first map?

it's ok, not the best, but nice that every 3 min.:"aaaaaaaaaaaah shit not again!! *fall* " ^^
it's a bit problematic that the way of the jumppads go thru water, but it works and that's important.

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sorry for bad English :p

Design		 8/10	Very well designed, lighting is atmospheric
Gameplay	 4/10	Not very well suited to Sauerbraten's speed
			Too many pickups
Skill		 8/10	Some nice use of geometry and water
Presentation	 6/10	Fair Quadropolis node
			Relative directories not used
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		6.5/10	Nice map, could be better tested

A fair map, very good for a first one, keep trying! Very visually appealing.

• Everything (including the waterfalls) could be a little wider (maybe expand the map into the wall a little)
• Try taking out some pickups, and adding in some armour, healthboost, quad.
• You might want to change the 'watercolour' to be more green like the rest of the map

An ETZ containing waypoints for this map is now in SauerMod's CVS.

Its too green. But I like the game play, with the water.