It's a nice map, but for me it still would be a WiP.
Here are some suggestions:
-don't make jumppads at the spring board, because then you jump more than a half of the swimming pool
-make the sofa a bit more round, looks better
-clip the beds otherwise you can wlk through them
-make the slide (at the swimming pool) so that you slide down and don't have to use jumppads
-make the pond look a bit more natural
-build the tent, don't use the roof of a fountain
-the bottomside of the stairs in the houses should be sloped
-some of the handrails are a bit hight i think
-the roof texture on some houses should be changed
-the ground texture of the swimming pool shoul be changed
-i would use other particles with the fire
either particles 0 0 0 0, particles 0 0 0 0 + particles 3 4 0 0 or particles 3 -1 -1 0

These are my suggestions, but most of them are some detailed things and i normally do my maps very detailed. I hope it's not too frustrating.