Design 4/10 Some areas far too open without detailing
Odd movement limiting geometry on the bridge
Lighting poorly done
No pickups whatsover, why limit it to instagib?
Gameplay 2/10 Map is for instagib only
Skill 3/10 Some fancy use of geometry in some areas (stairs, etc)
Presentation 5/10 Packaged fairly well
No mapshot or readme
Less common RAR format used
No relative directory structure
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3.5/10 Could be much better with more effort
Keep going at this map, there are some good ideas, the use of indoor/outdoor is well done, but what it has in charm, it loses in beauty.
- Fix up your lighting, some of the bridges are dark.
- Drop in some pickups for other game modes, maybe even add some bases to it for capture games, it might even suit it.
- Add some more texturing detail, fill in that middle area more. Small things go a long way in visual appeal.
- What is up with that triangle thing on the bridge that stops you strafing properly?
