I really like the entrance of your pyramid, good idea ! Also the broken parts inside the pyramid are looking good already. Yes, it seems very unfinished, just looks as if you just begun, and i think it could suit well for an SP map, too. Add more content and submit it again then, when you think it´s finished. Well done for a very first map, you already have a couple of good ideas, although i think the size of this map is too big, there is too much unused space around the map. Maybe you could add some dunes or make the terrain more bumpy ? Would look good i think.

Can´t say much about pickup placement yet, due to it´s work-in-progress-state.

2/5 (atm)

Note: Please use small letters (PX ---> px) and put the .ogz into the folders packages/base, so everyone can unpack the .zip-content directly into the Sauerbraten folder, so that there is no need to open packages/base manually first)

Keep it up !

So far, I like it but ammo is a little scarce. I like the rubble fallen from the ceiling and secret passages. my main gripe, though, is that I think there is too much noclip. try using less noclip, add some more ammo, and make it exiting! so far most of it seems to be just plain hallways everywhere. Keep working on it, and it'll be great!