This is much better than most 4-hour-first-ever maps I've seen, but the golden rule still stands - a map takes days, a good map takes weeks, an amazing map takes months.

"ONE SHOT, ONE KILL"
-Official Motto, U.S. Army Sniper Reg.

It's a good start. However, I need to point out some stuff that I'm sure others will also complain about in the near future. ;)

First, it feels way too cluttered. This is something I'm still trying not to do in my maps. Those poles and low ceilings make it almost impossible to jump around on the upper level, and I'm sure it will be frustrating in a battle.

It's easy to "escape" the map by rifle jumping out of the main area and ending up on the outside, where obviously no one is supposed to go.

Also, there are too many pickups.

Otherwise, I think the general layout is good. If you can, get some friends to play with you on it to get a better idea of what works and what doesn't.

Well, The desing in this map lacked proper gameplay. The halls and corridors are too small. Imagine running down one of them then seeing an enemy. You cant strafe jump because theres a wall in the way. This map strikes me more like a "see and kill" map. I'm sorry but this map is not a real hit, try a bit harder. Read the mapping tips by Makke.