Nice job

Your texturing is a lil wierd, the main wall/sand texture you use both on the floors and as a main building material, Kinda looks like a less sand looking concrete would fit better. Also some of your clif edges (especially the pits by the flag. are way too refinded they may look better jagged and rocky :)

Also the lighting should be a lil more red/yellow. Maybe boost the red and green colors to make it look less white.

Lastly the lights on the red side dont really need to be red, when playing you really dont need any more visual cues on which side you are on. Maybe just make them white like the other side :)

chasester

Time to take a review again;

The map itself looks good. I'll ignore the incredible amount of Z-fighting surfaces due the lots of curves being used on buildings, as that's probably my laptop.
The lighting feels quite natural. The trimmings around edges could use a different texture so they pop out more (especially for the pit around the YA).

Despite the flow being good, the trail from 1 flag to another feels too short. I found out after looking around a bit that it takes 7 seconds to get the flag of the opponent to your own. That creates a situation were the defending player has no chance to get back the flag at all as he has no proper time to go after the attacking player anymore.
The trail itself feels pretty good due it's lot of zigzagging, but it should be extended or stretched a bit (so it takes about 9 to 10 seconds before actually getting that flag).

The placement of the Quaddamage feels great, I like it!

The map doesn't need a lightprecision 16, it takes a lot of file-size actually. Even lightprecision 48 would do.
A nice CTF-map, all the trails feel the same lenght towards each flag, just pretty short in my opinion.
8/10

I definitely like it better with the floor :P

All jokes aside, this version's great! I didn't have high hopes for this map at first, but I really like what you've done with it. It has a nice original theme and decent flow, and pretty much everything a good ctf map needs. There are only a couple flaws; one being that in certain spots I feel as if I should be able to jump to certain places yet I can't (or is too difficult to), and another being that the teledest is a bit too close to the exit of that corridor, so I often find myself slipping and falling down.

Also a couple edit bugs here and there.
7/10 :)

To fix the teleport I would select the teleport then hit "," key and then change the 3 value to 0 (you have it set to 1 right now, this retains the velocity of the player, meaning that you kinda get thrown through the teleport. When set to 0 it sets the velocity to 0 so the player comes through the teleport and then stops, This will remove this problem, and flows better.

Also on the trimming on the ramps, I would not flush the trim with the ramp, this looks poor, You can trim it by using a gridsize lower, this adds maybe 2 or 3 verts (once remiped) and looks a lot better (on the 4 point slopes you will have to go down 2 gridsizes).

Honestly i had no probroblems jumping through this map, Idt the jumps are to difficault maybe im just not as much of a dare devil and only map jumps I know i can make. Though I would noclip the corners on the dome (near the death clip) and then clip the top flush so that it is easier to walk on (circles are hell for physics). And Lastly I would no clip all the water by the bases, Its wierd that you are fine until you swim to far down :P. (or i guess you could remove the deathclip entirely, and make it a hiding spot :)

good job
chasester

@zfighting
How are you getting zfighing on a voxel terrian? Are you sure its not tearing. What do you have the zbuffer set to? Ive never had a issue with zfighting, and you you shouldnt unless there are bad cubes on the map (say one way cubes or such), or it is a model fighting with the surface, because the way a voxel terrain works, no voxel is ever touching another, so its basically impossible. I'd love to see pics/video of this, mostly for my own amusement.

My first impression on the looks of this one: Really nice geometry. Boring and unnatural light. Weird mix of textures.

Suggestions:

Blue skybox with white/yellowish sun. (Yes, I know, it should be two suns.) Yellowish sunlight. Mostly yellowish lightsources in tunnels/rooms, some smaller light blue lightsources as a contrast to yellow and corresponding to the blue sky.

Make a decision on textures/shaders. Choose very few concrete and sand textures, maybe some rusty (orange/redish) stuff for terrain and buildings. Chose black and grey panel/tech/computer-textures from one textureset for pipes/wires/computers/space/antenna-stuff as a contrast. Use/write coherent shaders.

Use texture-blending.

Right now, it does not feel like tatooine. Too clean and artificial. Should look more worn down like this:

http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/2/22/Mos_Eisley_spaceship.png/revision/latest?cb=20121210214152

All in all: very promising, but still a far way to go.

Appreciate all the criticism and ideas, currently working to improve the map (hopefully) cheers
-nop