Gah! I post my map, and just a day after someone posts another map using the same texture pack! Oh well, at least it's a good pack.

Anyway, I think this is a pretty decent map. The texturing could be a bit better, i found some areas to be a bit noisy and confusing, but it's pretty decent. I'm not completely sold on the layout though, I like the idea of the two corridors right on top of each other but other than that i generally found the map to be a bit hard to navigate. My only other comment is that maybe you could remove that sound next to the computer terminals, or at least make it a lot quieter? Those beeps are really high pitched and irritating. Anyway, good work! Thanks for sharing.

yeah, I saw your map and was a bit peeved that it had the same textures myself haha. Sorry about that, just a coincidence. And the sounds were dine in 5 minutes at 1:00 in the morning so if there are mistakes I'll just fix them in the next release.
Thanks for your review!

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As previously told, the texturing isn't of the map isn't great. It could be more aligned with the geometry of the map.

Interesting mix of the skybox with the cloudbox. I'm not sure if it really is that effective on this way as it feels like it appears too dark right now (compared to the texturing).

A license related question;
What's the original source of the custom textures and what are their license?

The flow could be better as there are places that could be clipped so you don't bump against it (like the edge of the glass in a floor after taking a teleport). There is also a ceiling which you frequently bump against if you jump from the floor with riflerounds spawning on it and a jumppad which launches you to a higher stage.
That small fence doesn't feel right in such map; especially when there's no where else such a thing and when it's that low (which breaks the purpose of a fence; to keep people inside a certain area for like not jumping into death-material or so).

Nice to see you've added sounds inside the map. It definitely scores points for that.

The map surely has some nice details like those rocks floating above your head, some transmitter inside of the map (is it? I'm not really sure), a different texturing than you would normally see. But the theme isn't really coming out well. Is it really an industrial space-themed map? Then show it. Perhaps looking at metl4 would help a lot as that map has the very same theme while it's brilliant.

Anyway, hope that helped a bit. I'll give it 6/10 so far.

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Bump! Thx to Redon for taking the time to look this over.

Hmmm...
seems like you didn't like the easter eggs we made with pepsi...
At least you should left the one with the bird :'(

1/10