I'm back, this time I plan to be around some more. So I've tested your map here, and while it has its potential, there are a few things you should have in mind.

- The map is way too small, it has only one area and so few ways around it, campers would really have fun in this scenario. Try adding some new rooms and make some path around.

- It has little detail, everything is too squarish, windows, doors, everything. Try to use border textures around windows and doors and make them look less plain.

- Thank heavens you didn't abuse trim textures as so many around here tend to do, but about the red round light you may have abused just a little. Textures have to make sense.

- I think I'm using the word "too" too much =\

The map is avobe regular, you should improve it and it could really be a neat map.

2/5 Stars

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The way of the R.T.F.M. (Read The Fucking Manual).

Ive made it bigger

This map is...

> very small. Maps that are small are very bad multiplayers and although the arcitecture was moderately well done, it felt very exposed, even when you were inside.

> Like ratboy said: Everything is Squarish. The whole point of sauerbraten is to make arcitecture that does not resemble that of a cube based origin.

> Pointless textures and overuse. This issue is the greatest. The arcitecture was majorly let down by over use of textures and some textures felt rather out of place in an egyptian style level.

> Anyway, the map needs fauther extentions if it will ever become a map that rates highly. 2/5