This is good for a first map. I like how it starts out easy and gradually gets harder, but I never felt stuck or frustrated.

The visuals are simple but effective, which is rare for a first map. Usually people (myself included) try to go all-out for detail and have lots of texture errors, but this map has a simple style which is good for racing. The fog is a bit too thick sometimes (especially on the bridge where you can't see the other side) but it gives a nice effect and I wouldn't remove it completely.

One suggestion I would make is: in the Egyptian room, put the spikes further away from the teleporter. I ran straight into them without having time to stop the first time, and something like that would make people feel cheated in multiplayer. Also, the "trippy" green room is cool but I would put some obstacles in there because it looks a bit empty.

Also, "became a free" reminds me of polandball. Not trying to make fun of you, just pointing it out. (The correct way is "became free")

Detailed description was fixed a little.
"became a free" >> "became free"
Thank you!

awesome job, Extr3m3! :D Very tricky and great atmosphere! Have you submitted it to the sauer-race servers yet? :D I could do that for you if not!
love, meow! =)

My father deleted my PC data. (-o-;)
So I lost all map, mod, script...
but I don't never give up! I'm thinking about new map's constitution!
Give us a little more time, I know you will be happy.
Thank you :)

It's really great for first map.
There are some things which could be improved, though:
- please set maptitle variable.
- more spawnpoints would be nice. currently there is only one spawnpoint in very constrained space, it will cause problems in multiplayer race servers because there are more than one player.
Otherwise, it's really great looking for the first map, and generally great looking compared to lot of other race maps.
It seems you intended this to be singleplayer racemap, but if you somehow add more spawnpoints, it should work fine for multiplayer raceservers.