I think 5 health is a bit ridiculous for a map this small. Also 1 shells? 1 armor (and it's yellow?)

I can understand it's a speed map... but why do you limit yourself? Do /mapenlarge and make some 2015 terrain, not 2005 terrain. Your map will look a lot nicer.

I don't fight in sauer much, if at all, but the flow of this map feels meh.

I will give a 4/10 overall and +1 because it's a speed map. Total 5/10.

I find this very good, just the background, and some places could be using a bit more space, thats why the flow feel a little weird.

To me its a 6/10. Its a nice job for a speed map.

bump

imo the flow is better than in most sauer maps, .. well.. actually it is a bit blocky, but that makes it a perfect duel map (more shoot than run).
Though if you really want to make the gameplay a bit faster youll probably have to reorder the main parts a bit (like jumppads, teleporters, gateways..) (e.g: lowering the jumppad skywalk to half the size giving an extra height level).
But yeah well, its already really catching the feel of a duel map this way.

Pretty solid work, just the textures are .. meh. i'd actually would love to see a complete remake of the textures. Than this map would really fit what people want. (Well maybe add some details and variety to the walls as well )

6/10 for now, 8/10 for a retextured version and 9/10 for more details :D

EDIT P.S: btw the license is also a bit 'annoying'. maybe you should think about making it libre (e.g. CC BY 4.0 or CC BY-SA 4.0)

Updated 7/23/2015

LAYOUT CHANGES:
-Added platform behind left ledge
-Deepened area underneath left ledge
-Added a little room in the lower walkway
-Widened both upper and lower right walkways
-Added a jumppad to the teleport
-Lowered terrain behind jumppad for rocket splash

VISUAL CHANGES:
-Revamped teleport exit
-Numerous decorations/visual changes + additions
-Extended/improved terrain
-Minor texture changes
-Got rid of the sloppy outer trim
-Redid sunlight and skylight
-Changed cloudcolor
-Lowered fog
-Fixed a ton of bugs

CLIPPING/NOCLIPPING CHANGES:
-Removed clipping on center structure
-Cleaned up
-Made roof a little bit higher

PLAYERSTARTS/AMMO CHANGES:
-Changed playerstarts to accomodate layout changes
-Removed one of the rockets and replaced it with cartridges

MAP SPECS:
7 playerstarts
3 riflerounds
2 shells
2 bullets
2 grenades
1 cartridges
1 rockets
2 health
1 greenarmour