Just a few things...
1. Why are there no playerstarts???
2. You forgot to texture the insides on the curved windows
3. Are those supposed to be pipes below the glass? If so why are they wood...?
Other than those, I like. Especially the scrolling textures.
До свидания и заткнись
-P

Overall, it's a nice little map with a unique theme. I'd love to see more like it. ^.^

Minor Bugs:
-Texture bug on one of the lion's faces the center platform
-Default texture inside window frames
-There is a tree poking through one of the windows
-The Little scroll-y light pillar things on either side of the short steps have barely visible default textures at the tops of them

Minor Suggestions:
-Sounds would be nice
-Could cut the underside of the pipes under the floor off & skytexture, as nobody will ever see them
-The teleports look nice, but they aren't very easily identifiable as teleports
-The steps between the scroll-y light pillar things mentioned above have two different textures for their top and side faces-- a little odd imo

So is anyone going to tell me why they rated 3/10 or do I just try to guess?

Well, let me put some constructive critism here...

I like the idea of the "engergy" which appears all around the map. However, it doesn't feel like the mm-ceilinglite1 is the right choice for it, as it isn't seamingless (while you would expect a constant flow of energy or more pulsating like when using the pulseglowworld shader or a variant of that).
The seams within the lower floor feels like it should be scrolled also (and emit some light).

Having tons of tubes next to each other doesn't feel like a nice detail. Don't concentrate details; rather spread it so there's a small essence of recognize within it. Obviously don't overuse the same details over and over again.

The lighting is too bright so far. Almost that bright that shadows aren't really getting along very well. Keep in mind that lighting isn't just about the lighted areas. Don't forget about darker areas also (preserve some contrast within the atmosphere).

The upper level of the map feels really flat and looks like it needs another (but smaller) platform on top of it.

Next to all those points, I see potency in this map and like the idea.

these days i like to keep my mouth shut, but FINE ILL MAKE A COMMENT.

The Good: The majority of the map has the stony "energy" theme which I think is a good look and I like the growth which shows how long its been abandoned. Also I have no problems with the weapon placement except maybe you could put a greenarmour or HB in the far empty corner. Also the teleports are interesting and a different twist.

The Bad: No playerstarts?!?! Also you should end up clipping so that nobody can climb up over the map and see the untextured stuff but I'm sure you know this already. The aesthetic aspects of the map are what stood out to me. I think the texturing was chosen poorly. You should just stick with the theme I said above instead of trying to put wood, nature, white tiles, and stone floor all into one. Another thing is that the wall and floor colors are very similar on the lower portion of the map. I would suggest you use the contrast like on the upper portion with the white and the gray instead of the gray on gray stone walls (or something of that nature). One thing that really bugs me is having arches that cast those annoying shadows but I understand that may just be the way it is. I also realize that this game is called Cube for a reason, but it's too blocky for my taste, even add some trim on the upper white floor to not make the edges look so sharp and square. Another thing I don't understand is the ladder and jumppad together, just make it one or the other! Maybe like the adjacent pad with the arrow would suffice; and the missing chunks of the tile don't make sense to me either besides adding variety. The outer wall that is outside you can ride n glide on the corner, I would say thats a big no-no. I'm not a fan of the spotty yellow lights on the edge of the floor on the upper part make no sense to me as the light textures are moving, not much point to circle lights. Finally I must allude to my comments on the growth of the vines and trees or whatever, some stick right through the glass! Impossibru! From a gameplay standpoint, I'm not a big fan of the outer upper portion being so wide open with no cover whatsoever but I think I'd still enjoy myself. Other than that I think that's all from me.

I hope this is good enough comment for you why I say 3/10. I know I only really focused on the bad, but you want to know ways how to make it better this isn't some place to make you feel better about yourself. I just trying to get the best out of you! Nevertheless I realize this is your creation and not mine, and some of it is just my opinion... however if you need further clarification like a picture from me or something than I'd be happy to show you.

P.S. - Have you ever played Portal 2? Some of the ideas remind me of the beginning levels where you awaken and do tests in the abandoned test rooms with lots of natural growth, I think piggy-backing on that idea would be awesome! Here's a picture of what I mean: http://bit.ly/TS4skW

P.S. Encore - IM NOT LAZY заткнись, до свидания

Updated 07/26/14.

Aesthetic:

Changed lighting/ambient
Changed skybox
Added particles
Added terrain (Thanks, Skur!)
Added playerstarts
Added details (mapmodels, structures, etc)

Gameplay:

Tweaked ammo placements
Added a GA
Added a small platform in the upper walkway
Added skybox barriers to improve flow in ladder and teleports

Misc:

Bug fixes
Changed screenshot
Added .txt

Thanks for the tips. The platform is near the large curved window on the edge of the map. Don't know how you missed it. It's got a door near it.
As for the rest of the crits, I'll look into making some changes

I was under the impression that you meant the pathway seemed flat, to which I agreed.

-I find this map very atractive (the center reminds me portal) i like the aspect of the map but not the layout, it looks like all the space that a newmap with size 1024 provides wasnt enought, some parts of the layout looks very compressed and other part more spacious, specially the center is very compressed in relation with the other almost 3 connected corridors, you could have made it more open, or maked more space for the stairs, you have to exploit all the space that the map provides.
-Also the background is still very squarish, just a wall behind the glass, and some small green rocks, the background can be way much better than that.
-I find there is too much health pick ups for this small map.

overall the map has very good aspect, but the layout and the background leave something to be desired.

6/10 fabulous

UPDATE: 9/11/2014

Moved whole teleport 2 room back some and added underground area for gameplay relief

Removed hallway wall and added steps for open gameplay/flow improvement

Minor layout changes such as moving walls/stairs to accommodate the major changes

Rearranged ammo placements and armor

Changed lighting

Added detailing and textures

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Hope you enjoy! Please critique.

Anyone? :)

This map is really pretty nice. There are only a few things I don't like.

It could use a little more roundness in the geometry, everything seems very sharp and square.
There still seems to be a lot of trim missing.
It could use some more interesting and better done details and geometry, maybe make the walls nicer to look at with unique things rather than just solid flat walls.
I don't know if I like the reflecting floor, especially when no other texture does that. It seems like it doesn't fit the rest of the map.

The layout is nice, I like the changes from the last version. And I really like the hole in the wall you can jump through, it's fun and very smooth.

Overall I think the map is good visually, it is definitely unique, but it is still missing some things that could make it very interesting, and somethings still look incomplete, like stair thing with the shotgun spawn in the middle.

Edit:
What if the yellow cracks emitted some light?

It's a quite nice map. the (i think) most important non gameplay Thing you should do is better lightning. e.g. i really like the way Pandora is lighted (though you dont have Atrium to look like that).

a .png-file still isn't working on Windows version of Sauerbraten as ingame screenshot, so use .jpg-format instead.

I don't see any proper layout and gameplay changes so far. I refer back to the advice I gave you in my previous comment.

I can't give any points for the new update as I actually nearly see anything has been changed flow and gameplay technically. It seems like you've just ignored the comment as there aren't any waypoints included also.

Thanks for your input. As for telling me to refer back to your advice, you should be the one checking it.

2. Switch the YA with the GA. This makes the lower floor more important and isn't creating a "perfect survival area".

did that.

"Delete the wall between main area and the room on top of the jumppad area. This makes that area way more involved with the rest of the map while you still have the benefit of being some sort of "rest room". The height is meant to gain some more complexity within the map as it currently is just flat (there are only 2 layers actually).""

That's a pretty big change. Did that.

4. Make the hole of the jumppad less wide so it can be used to walk on. You could also use the teledest instead of the jumppad to gain area for movement (and perhaps put the teledest below).

Did something similar.

I did ONLY layout changes and ammo placements here.