Overall, a pretty good map design.
i thought the very first room was very cool, like the ceiling especially.

found a texture glitch on the 1st "dome-house-thing" to the left as you enter the room with all the "dome-house-things". you can see the sky where you should'nt on the side of the building.

monster placement is good - i like the rattamahattas coming down from the ceiling in the last area....

my biggest complaint is that the map is TOO DARK!!
i could hardly see anything in some areas.
and some walls have 6+(!!) light textures on them, but the area is still DARK?

there are many DARK areas with no pick-ups either, and i ran out of ammo once and had to punch my way thru a bunch of enemies.

would like to see a re-spawn point added as well, becuase i died once half-way thru!
;)

3/5 stars -
looking forward to seeing more of your work!
- JUNEBUG

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Well, This map is better than your last one but you can still improve it. I agree with janebug. Your lights are too bright where their placed and the whole map is dark. I died half way through as well. Try putting some more health packs in the middle cortyard. The textures can be changed to give a better effect of the town. I like what you did with the roof bits. Try making more maps like that. Your monster placement was good but there is basicaly NO AMMO! try putting in more.
Also when I played it I saw a helpig floating in the air facing away from me... !?
Good map, keep improving and you will be making legendary maps!

This is the short version of the level. Thanks for all the advice, i will fix up all the problems. Can anyone give me some more realistic doors? For an egyptian Singleplayer, Im not sure that they had technology to such an extent!