This review is created in about 15 minutes, as your map isn't worth much more time according to the time you've spend on it.

The map has a flow issue. Everything is just too narrow for the gameplay of Sauerbraten. Some correct dimensions for a good flowing layout with a realistic theme would be that you're dwarf/midget sized.

There's no clipping on the map at all.

The whole floor is flat, just like the gameplay.

As it's nearly your first map and I've seen much worse lately, I'll rate it a 4/10.

It has basically zero interesting value gameplay-wise, but it looks nice.
I don't mind narrow doors for SP maps, most have narrow areas.

4/10 for gameplay. it's not much but it's not broken either.
6/10 for graphics. besides a couple textures that should be rotated, there's nothing really wrong with it. I like the gate, though realistically the bar shouldn't be floating.

Hope to see more from you. :)

Very small, i cant enjoy a map with this dimensions, i can see your editing skill just looking at the way that you made the houses and all the ambient. Put more ffort in your maps, 2 hours is not a reasonable time to finish a map.
the textures are okay.

2/10