Looks good so far (according to the screenshot). I'll view it over a couple of days.

A (probably will be pretty long) list of my thoughts about this map:
Very first thoughts:
- Hmm, looks pretty nice at first glance
-The spotty snow blending on the paths doesn’t look very good IMO
-The wood railings have very different shades of brown on different sides of them. I’m not sure if this is texture or shadow, but it looks weird.
Okay, it is different textures. I don’t know if it’s supposed to be that the wood is polished in some places and not in others, but I don’t like it. You’ve used so many different wood textures, you don’t need to use multiple ones on a single object.
-The skytexture slope on the stairs seems unnecessary, but there’s no problem with that. Then again, small stairs are sometimes annoyingly bumpy, so I guess it might help.
-there are some spots where the blendmap of the snow on the wood suddenly stops, leaving a clean line with no snow
-some smaller roofs have the textures rotated weirdly, probably from rotating them after copypasteing
-from a gameplay flow point of view, it seems weird that the bottom of the spiral staircase has only one exit. At least open a couple windows there, because right now it’s wasted potential.
-all the small details like the roof and railing structures, the designs of the low rails, and the torches look really nice.
-And the walls are varied without feeling crowded with textures!
-there’s a rock in the “garden” that’s missing ¼ of itself, probably from the larger rock being pasted in after it nearby.
There are a lot of nice details in the interior of the map. The exterior, however, is a lot of boring open space and a big ugly plain wall. Players are intended to get on the wall, which doesn’t add to gameplay at all. It just encourages players not out on the wall to camp out inside to not get sniped. I would advise that the wall should only run across the map in one direction, not surround it in a boring square. The other half can be mountains or something, since you already have steep mountainous terrain around the map. Also, you can just clip the map boundaries, it won’t break suspension of disbelief if you can’t just completely out of the map if there is a boundary (like the edge of the wall)

You should really constrain the outside of the map. Obviously there needs to be land under where the bridges cross, but other than that there doesn’t need to be any real perimeter.

I've done some minor fixes, most of which Mmeaninglez has pointed out, if you've downloaded & are going to review, please make sure to download the updated version.
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Hi! I'm Japanese :D I like this map! :DD

Raising the ambient to 70 isn't very good for the atmosphere. It looks like the map is shown in vertex rendering mode (a very bland appearance).

Once again, should this map contain that huge amount of triangles and vertices? I think not. It could be optimized way better as it is now. For example, the scrolls are placed very repetitive and they lose their magic as being a detail (while they only reduce the performance of the map). Delete at least half of them (which should make the bookcases less copy-pasted also). The outside of the map isn't that great addition to the map as well. It feels like it's placed there to "save the kittens", instead of actually being part of the play.

Once more, all I see is copy-paste. Perhaps you're working on it for a long time already, but why don't you spend just a little more to make the map appear more natural?

The texturing is odd; there is no snow on the roofs at all while there is on the ground. I've never seen that before, unless those buildings are being heated that good (but I doubt that because the only source of heat are some torches).
Once again, there are particles floating around with no torch at all as well.

I won't mention anything about flow or gameplay, as both points is something the map lacks (and I won't state it how to improve it again). My only advice on this would be to go on with the "shrine" (delete the rest) and make it more asymmetrical (less long stairs as well).

It's a nice theme and a good attempt, but there are just the common flaws again. Don't get me wrong and don't take it too personal, it's not a bad map as certain previous attempts. Have you actually tried to join a clan and get some input from them (mX, MH, etc)? Perhaps certain mapping clans could help.