Hi !

U showed me your map yesterday already, but unfortunately i always got dropped out (network error), so i couldnt give u a statement anymore...

Ok, lets see.

I like the Skylounge and i can see some good ideas here. I also like the layout, but:

1. Please try using some different textures, the default ones dont really fit in a playable map.

2. To make this map really playable, u should make more possibilities to get a level higher. The only acces to there is from the double-stairs at the outside...(or with grenadejump)

3. Dont u think it would be better to have the SkyLounge some higher, maybe above the map ? ("Sky"-Lounge)

4. The oasis could use some more work, looks unfinished at the water edge.

5. more lights ! And please try to use some different lights, too. Looks better.

All in all i can say, this 1 is nice for a first map, u already have good ideas about teleporters and layout. There are also some nice spots (i like the texturing idea in the corners where u used 2 different textures), but this map really needs some more improvement,
seems just unfinished and still kinda empty.

Hope, i could help u, i m looking forward to an update :)

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