Also inb4 "/screenshot".

Hm, seriously Zoo, what does that yellow armor spot remind me of? :/

Here are my random thoughts about this map, I am writing these while exploring the map for the first time.

You need more detail outside the map. I looked up at the blank flat walls and felt that something was missing. Rocks? Other buildings? Nothing would probably be better than flat blank wall.

It's common to have jumppads represented by steam, and your map follows this convention mostly. HOWEVER there is a steam vent next to the yellow armor that inexplicably does not fling players into the air. The rules of a map don't have to make sense, but they should be consistent. In other words, don't have steam sometimes be a jumppad and sometimes not be.

A few light fixture textures do not have lights associated with them.

For all the light there is in this map, there are some really dark shadows some places, which seems weird.

One of the shells pickups on the higher level is floating strangely high in the air.

there are only three health pickups. Lots of people say that you shouldn't have too many, but they seem like very few here. Maybe if they were placed differently there would have a greater presence. For instance, the two on the bottom are pretty close together, they maybe could be spaced differently. Actually, I'm bad at pickup placement, so I'm not really one to give advice. It's not horrendous, but there's a few too many shells.

I like the scrolling textures where they've been used.

Hopefully something I've said here is helpful to you. I'd probably rate it 5.5/10 right now.

Thanks guys for the crit! I'll get to work as soon as I can, though I might not be on very much as school started today. Progress might be slowed due to homework.

needs waypoints for bots along with a screenshot in the download.

Hi Zoo!

Here come my personal thoughts after yesterdays spontaneous duel on your newest version of this.
I don't know, if the version i've seen yesterday still matches the file uploaded here.

Flow: I keep crashing into corners/walls in many places. Jumping up to the rockets from the lowest level e.g. is possible, but it's a flowkiller imo. The stairs and hallways are very narrow also. In some places i crash into the ceiling-thingys. The distances and heights do not seem to work well with sauerbraten movement.

Items: I do not understand the item-setting. 1 x rockets and 5 x shells? What's the thought behind this? I was just searching for the rockets all time. No fun to me.

Textures: This is still work in progress, so i don't care too much about textures and details. But also in this stage of map creation there should be a basic concept, that allows easy visual orientation on the map. Using the same or very similar textures/details (e.g. the columns on the wall) for the floor AND walls AND stairs AND ceilings without any trims makes it hard to orientate and navigate - even if it's such a small map.

Clipping: It's either illogical or unfinished: Objects of same/similar size/form are sometimes clipped, sometimes not. Very annoying ingame.

Layout: Basic pit with basicly two levels, which is not wrong, but pretty (too) high ledge. Connection between these two levels only works via 3 jumppads (and the too steep stairs at the yellow armor). Weaponjumping is almost impossible (even if there were enough rockets on the map). Since the "rooms" behind the walls are so small, you are permanently confronted to your enemy and from the ledge behind yellow armor, you control basicly every playerstart, which can make a comeback for the fragged player very hard.
Also, i still don't get the point of copying the yellow armor area of complex.

That's basicly it. I hope some of these points or somehow constructive.

See you ingame.