Clever map, good textures. Great for multiplayer.

It's a good map for being a first,
but, honestly, you made some beginner's mistakes too.

There is waaaaay too much ammo lying around,
you shouldn't ever have more than two packs lying close together,
usually one will do!

In the "circular room" (where crosshair is pointing in screenshot) you have a cube which could be fixed with some corner-pulling ...

The "feel" of the map is a little weird - some places are very open, others feel totally cramped, also there are a lot of times where I have no real options ... so that way anybody can easily predict my movements ... but that's a general problem with so small maps ;-)

Keep at it - there are aspects that show your talent as well -
for example the lights at the base of some pillars (a detail newbie-mappers seldom use) and quite a few corners with interesting/clever architectural modeling!

Thanks MeatROme for your advice, I will take that into account for my future maps!

As a student under you, This map is a benchmark for my contnued services learning Sauerbraten and Cube under you. I like the roof sniper spots and the many hiding places throughout the map. Ammo is a little over done in places,(try using slightly less) but overall this is the kind of maps i love to playtest.

Thats a really nice first map !
I like the overall layout, and, as MeatROme already said, u used a very interesting architecture, okay, maybe some "finetuning" on some spots, but i can imagine that it would be fun to play in DM.

The ammo is too much, really. not generally, but too much of the same on one spot. It would be smart to place some of the ammo on several "hotspots" to give this map a kind of direction, also there are too many healthboosts IMO, but thats just a matter of taste, i think.

The overall look of your map is very "clean" and there are very many really interesting and good-built spots. I like this map - 4 stars.