this is by no means a complete and "ready-to-release" map.

the outside area is huge and with no details.
even just a small wall around the arena so you dont just see the flat map edge would be a start...

you've got some really original ideas here - the map just needs to be fleshed out some more. more areas, more details. trees, perhaps?

what i like about this map:
the carrot patch (SWEEEEET!)
the "man" statue
the HUGE ammo/armor room
the flags

what i don't like about this map:
not enough above water areas/details
too many traps that make the player die

2/5 stars.
note: this map could be really sweet with some work put into it.

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Some ideas could be used in an SP map. Like some traps after some choices. But "invisible" traps are not nice. It makes your map unpredicable. Also, deadly traps could be used sparsely, and "go back to a previous place" traps would be preferred. Of course, I'm talking about SP map ideas.

Those symbols on ground are a nice idea (although they are very ugly). Some games have similar things (remember Donkey Kong for SNES?). Those arrows signs from Mousewars! map look a lot better, though.

That "glass elevator" is an interesting idea.

Now, talking about this map. It is big and icredibly low-detailed. I would say it has no details at all. It uses the same texture almost everywhere. Those traps and corridors and teleports at that building make no sense at all. That "floating" box over water also makes no sense. The big water area makes my poor video card suffer. :) And from Physics I know that water must remain at same level.

In overall: has some interesting ideas but is a bad map.