Its quite bland. you need to make the flow better.

there is a place in the middle that i have to jump (in the dark of all things) fix that.

fix the lighting, add more laps, whatever you need to do to make the pit brighter, add better flow in the middle, add better flow to the bases, its too closed in, ect.

Not that interesting map but ah well, let's just comment it...

Theming
The theme is overused and not very original. I recommend to post a map with the egyption theme only when it really looks outstanding and way better than any other map on Sauerbraten, which uses that theme.

Texturing
It's already a lot better compared to your previous maps, since you've focussed on if a texture fits it's geometry or not. It's a nice step forward, but your definitely not there yet. The map still has too much of the same textures and with the same colours. This creates that there isn't much contrast at all and makes the map look boring and flat.

Geometry
Surrounding the map by using a wall is definitely not recommended when your using the egyption theme. It makes the map looks box-like and it breaks realism. Be sure to add mountains instead.
The cave contains some geometry-bugs at it's entrances. Fix them.

Lighting
It's not bad you've added a beautiful sunlight for creating a more realistic skybox, but be sure places like that cave aren't incorrect lighted by other light-entities. The red light looks very ugly and isn't logical at all.
The light outside the map could also be some more coloured (like more yellow-ish), it's too white at the moment.

Detailing
There isn't much details except mapmodels. It's not a bad thing to use mapmodels, but also let textures be part of the detail.

Clipping/noclipping
Very nice surrounding of clip, but just to be sure, also make a ceiling of clip, to be sure the player couldn't get out the map on any way.

Flow
The flow of the map isn't that great, but it's all flat. There are just 2 layers of platforms where you can travel trough and the rest is just some sub-layer, which always leads back to the layer where you came from. Be sure to add more layers in the map. A map which has a respective gameplay should have at least 2 (primary) layers, but with a lot corridors, corners, etc. So it shouldn't be open at all (unlike capture-night, face-capture and your map). If the map is open, it should have at least 3 (primary) layers, while they have tactical areas and none of them is really dominating the others.

Gameplay
There aren't any pickups added yet, which isn't great at all. Be sure before uploading a map that pickups are placed!

There is still a lot of work to do on the map, but on your skills as well. Keep it up, 3/10!

Thanks to your comments, and special thanks to you Suicizer, that you think i am getting better.
Well i know that there is still a lot of work, which is why i released it as "work in progress".
Well the theme just came out when i started editing. First there were only the entrances to the sublayer and when i mirrored them it began to come out as an egyptian theme.
Not the theme i had in mind when i started, but maybe the easiest way to find fitting textures.
Geometry is always a hard thing to me, especially using heightmap to create mountains is the only way i know, and not easy to handle for me. But to your comment that this looks boxy, i really do have to say that there are some maps in justice release that are boxy too such as wdcd.
The aspect of adding more details by using more textures is sure a way that i will follow.
Flow? I played the map with several friends and they didnt think that flow was a problem in this map, but lets see if some idea comes out.
Gameplay? Whats wrong with creating a map only for ctf?
Some of you know that i am very active on maplounge, and the modes that can be played there are limited to instactf and instahold at the moment, so it was normal to me to let this map in a state of fight for flag, but okay i will think of giving the map some pickups.
As i will be a little busy in "real life" next time, the changes will not occur immediately, but as i like this map they will......
Untill then, cu all nothing

OK. I wouldnt get this far to say that wdcd is crap. Besides i like this map. The only thing i wanted to say by mentioning it, was that even boxy maps can come to its honours. And yes i will work on on this map. so maybe i will reach the end of the rope once ;-)

i'll be fast

-The lower part: is too dark and the lights doestn make sense, example: torchs have to iluminate, and not the ceiling.
-Spammed textures: the dont have depth, the are just flat and uninteresting, you have to make at least more variety of textures in walls and for example... arches, doors pillars in the walls.
-no details: they are really important for make the map more interesting... you can put more terrain and make sand inside the buildings to make it better and little details in the pillars, buildings, walls...
-the whole map: the map is practically a copy paste map ,and worse, its just a egyptian map enclosed in a box!
-background: there is not background, although you can make structures outside the map for make it more real, the map still being a box, i recommend you to make details in the limits of the map, like big doors, fences, inacessibles buildings like ruins or more pyramids.
-bad flow: i think that the flow is okay, but not in the lower part... something is hindering.
-layout: 2 floors with a hole in the middle and 2 bases facing each other,well, i think its not that bad, but you have to think a bit more after to make your layouts, or atleast to observe other maps, like tempest, xenon or reissen they are good examples of details and good layouts, then you can try to make new layouts, you just have to make them, and then make new ones and there you can be better.
i dont want to ofense you, but this layout failed, now if you like mapping you can try to make new layouts, and NOT improve another olds, that make the same result, the layout isnt really easy, but is the most basic and important part of a map, the same with details.
too bad points and a few goods.

for me, its okay.
1/10