Well , after taking a little game with my friends called bots i would like to give you some review :
Layout : Your layout reminds me to face-capture and is a good start for your first map at quadropolis, but pls avoid narrow corridors, where you bump against the ceiling, because they break the flow completely.
Furthermore your layout is very open and it´s quite hard to score , especially while playing with skilled players
(or 98er bots , but that´s another story :P ). There´s also a problem with the water :
There´s just a little strip without death on the water, but the rest got some death over it , which is pretty unlogical and gives some frustration if you fail to reach this free strip.
All in all the layout has some funny spots and it´s a solid start at quadropolis 5/10
Texturing : Your texturing is kind of weird and got less variance on it . Everything looks brown , which gets boring after some games. Try to use different textures and place them correctly.
Overall i can live with that, but it could be improved very well 4/10
Detailing : There are some details i really like f.e. the pier of the bridge or the little robot-looking guardians, although they could be done better. But there are also some weird details like the seats on the top of the map, which give no sense to me. Also your terrain looks cruel and too shapy.In addition you kept the map really boxed-like, which breaks the atmosphere a lot.
Some good spots , some bad spots , some weird spots . It´s solid 5/10
Lighting : The outta lighting looks really warm, atmospheric and jars with the well choosen skybox. But inside the base with the flag 26 2 you forgot to give the big flame some lighting.You also used some white lights, which are looking really boring. All in all i can´t say i dislike your lighting, but there are some things left to do 6/10
Gameplay : Your ammo-placement is done well , but it´s quite hard to get some if you are playing with more than 4 people. So i would suggest to get some more in it. Overall it´s a good work 7/10
Result : It´s great to see you coming up with more and more skilling. It´s your first map here on quadropolis and it´s a solid work, which shows that you have some skill, which wants to be found.
Keep on mapping , i´m looking forward to your next maps , but for now i give 5,4/10
Greetings Mysterious
P.S. : I want to play it at nooblounge together with you. Maybe it feels better with real players than with bots. :P
