All rooms are flawlessly curved , and the metal constructions look good ; lightings are fair. However , I do not see the use or value of those tiny walls (or large scraps of metal ?) that block the way for no reason , I'm sure you can think of something better to replace them with. It looked odd to have just a staircase in an empty room as well - you should try to give some purpose or character to the smaller rooms , also differentiate blue-lit from red-lit parts (future blue and red bases , symetry is boring) ; lastly , staircases with a missing last step are annoying to fall from , try replacing them with slopes (more pleasant to walk on , too) for a smoother and lighter feel.

Considering it is an abstract tech arena , don't be afraid to add eye candy where it doesn't interfere with gameplay , it is not overdone. It looks like there is some room for more metal on the walls and ceilings , but that's your call of course. Maybe the red and blue tower rooms could have an extra level ? It would be neat to have powerups perched high up in the middle of them.

nice ideas, but it's a bit too symmetrical... not much to explore. and I agree with the stair thing (annoying as hell), and the tiny walls in the circle. The ones rased up are fine, but depressed, they dont do anything.

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Thanks for the comments, those are things i can work with, in the meanwhile, i fixed the stairs, they where a bit to annoying with pieces missing, but it won't drop them completely, i like stairs.

I added a platform to the 2 towers and rearranged the corridors leading towards it, you should be able to jump on it, but sometimes you won't, so you have to aim carefully.

I just keep working on it and keep an eye on the framerate. See ya later.

I actually liked the stairs, they added an abstract and odd feeling. Same with the random wall bits.

However I think there could be a bid more style, the towery things are cool but the walls and floor are pretty bland. Atleast maybe some more tower things or

About the symmetry, I don't like it personally- in any map. But sauer would feel odd without a few. ;)

Overall I like it. You have the bones and meat right, now add skin.

Thanks, adding some skin takes a bit more time, especially when you want to keep an eye on the framerate to avoid "Nice map, shame about the slideshow". I now started to add details to the walls and ceilings, but even with copy and paste that takes time, i also added places for respawns.

The final version will have some fog to, not enough to show up in the long corridors, but juste enough to add some depth when you are at the central arena, then it just looks like the towers standing a bit further away than they really are and it helps to show some contrast between the back of the central arena and the tower in the middle.

Like Boukharine said: "All rooms are flawlessly curved"

And that's true! Those round shapes are very nice. How did you make them? Some program or script? Or you just had a graph paper onto which you draw some circles?

I think people here would like to see some tutorials about how to make rounded shapes in sauerbraten.

Ah, about the map itself... Looks very good. It would be excellent for "Capture the flag" game mode (if someday sauer or some derivative implements that).