I like it. Its fun.

Just some things,

- Use more textures? nbd just a personal thing on my part.
- A little extra detail would be nice, its not bad, but not spectacular.
- When I saw "Krypton" in the name, I expected Supermans Icy Fortress like this one
http://img151.imageshack.us/i/smallvillespine.jpg/
AGAIN - nbd

I give you a 6. Its fun, but not anything super fantastic. :D

lol thx for this cool picture ^^
and btw this extra detail you mean is this lantern i built.

Well i will work on it and i will take your comment to heart :)

>:O stolen the name by my "rare gas" for mapname idea!

i like the map though :P

the gameplay is unique, but there are some mistakes, like the long corridor on the side, and the map appears a bit box-like

also i would either remove the banister on the lower stair, or make it even with the stairs

oh damn xD i thought i got the name from a magazine !!
Really sorry i forgot you told me this name some weeks before ^^

If you want to take the name for your project i will recall it immediatly :)

sry sry sry ......^^

ok im ready for a full analysis now.

I even used your map as an example for a good layout in my book :P

at least a part of it.

Gameplay:

the floorplan itself is okay, reminds me of wake5 a bit,

you got some kind of "main" area in the mid which is nice,
but the ways to get up are too steep, and either the ladder or jumppad is unnecesary because they are so close to each other.

You gave enough possibilities to hide, what i really like,
the pickup placement seem to be rather random, but it is balanced.

there is just too much on one level (the high platform at least)

layout: 8/10

audiovisuals:

audio: nonexistant :P but w/e its a duel map

visuals: hm, the lighting is rather boring, and the design of the torches/fire bowl thingies, look rather random. (you actually dont jail fire to give away light.
the only significant light is the teleporter.

no one can see the water unfortunatly, also nothing about the mountains, maybe set water level lower and make windows :)

6/10

you forgot to put as note that youll need svn to let te map work.

maybe its an idea to set up an own cfg, to make the textures more specified. this can help like when a texture actually should be turned like 90 degrees (as example, the "wooden plank" texture of the ladders).

the jumppad at the lowest platform with the ya could be better showed. its just like your jumping from nowhere, no sense at all.

the trimming of the door with a health very close to it, isnt textured completly (it has the partly the same texture as the wall).

the own made torches look bad against the other things of the map. what about just using the mapmodel torch?

the narrow platform that goes a bit down, at the right under the quaddamage could be trimmed too, just like the narrow platform at the opposite side (where a healthboost is spawning)

you could have used another texture as ceiling. the ceiling looks very boring just because it has the same textures as the walls.

clipping can be done more too, there are a lot of places above the platforms where players should be able to get there.

even tough there are some points that could be improved, the map looks pretty nice, the flow isnt bad and the gameplay is pretty fun too. good job, i pretty like the map.

thx for this real helpfull comment :) , i will work on it as soon as i got time for doing this.

Just one question : which part of clipping do you mean ?

ah well i know what you mean =) thx

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