Hmm well after watching your map, following things i was able see :
+interesting first look
+nice style
-lightning is the way too bright and boring (get rid of those white lights, they look like nothing !)
-texturing is quite chaotic but seems OKAY to me
-unlogical clipping breaks the atmosphere :(
-gameplay isnt that good (too much health, too less weapons)
-poor layout (imho)
-this "flying-stages" are heavy camper spots
All in all a medium map, nothing special, but also nothing too bad.
I personally wouldnt play it often because the gameplay and the flow is quite hard to play and i also didnt get the "wow-effect" while playing.
So 5/10 (keep it on)