good on the overall - there's lots of detailing missing for a spectacular map;
and a quick walk-through won't tell how well it plays - but the map has all it needs all there.
possibly some mid-level geometry fixes might be needed still, but I'm guessing it's fine-tuning mostly.
Like some lighting and item-placement and especially your mapsounds - they need larger fade-out radii!
At 1st sight: 6/10 - may be revised L8R.

It's a decent idea. I like the RVSF base areas as it's more open and has wider doorways. The closer I get to the CLA base, the more cramped the map becomes and seems a lot less detailed.

This would be fine for the community map pack if you want it to be included, but I would wait until you have fixed a few things. The outside areas' sky is too low, and is easy to hit your head - and the CLA base area needs a bit more detail.
edit- also, take the mapmsg out of the .cfg ;)

it's funny play here, for me one of the most important things :)

yeahhh good job man :)