It's a decent idea. I like the RVSF base areas as it's more open and has wider doorways. The closer I get to the CLA base, the more cramped the map becomes and seems a lot less detailed.
This would be fine for the community map pack if you want it to be included, but I would wait until you have fixed a few things. The outside areas' sky is too low, and is easy to hit your head - and the CLA base area needs a bit more detail.
edit- also, take the mapmsg out of the .cfg ;)