Tips to help Chasester In the real World

William_Shakespeare | 2010-03-30 08:41

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Chasester, I've been reading these forums for a while, and have noticed you are (often) nothing more then a legal troll. However, I enjoy your rants every now and then, and whenever you speak you tend to get a lot of comments. Now you’re trying to step it up to the next level, trying to actually critique instead of troll. Some tips... (and this goes for anyone else who writes like they're five)

** 1) Sound Intelligent.
Try to organize your thoughts before speaking. Example of your unintelligent writing
"U ever heard of neon, it was not even textured, its in the assassine release if you care."

Could be upgraded to fifth grade work by rephrasing the sentence as follows... "Have you ever heard of the map neon? It was so bad it didn't even get textured, yet made it into the assassin release."

** 2) Learn to Use Proper Sentence Structure.
Example of your work
"Point being that something hast to have enough theme so that it has continuity through the map but not so much that to make it realistic it loses all flow."

Could simply be rephrased as follows: "A map should have a consistent theme, but too much realism is frowned upon."

** 3) Learn Proper Spelling.
Example of your spelling
"The runner, also a noob playstyle, in which a player runs to the flag and back to there flag with very minumial thought for there own safty."

Corrected... "The runner, a noob play style, is where a player runs to the flag and back without regard for their safety (much like a suicide bomber).

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While some of you may think it wrong to call a member of this community on the carpet like this, I think you and I would both agree that Chasester has benefited us enough with his negative comments and rants, to deserve, free of charge, a second grade lesson in grammar,dedicated to improving his intellect.

--ADDENDUM--

Thanks for the responses, I want to ask you guys two things. 1) What do you think is Chaster's real age. 2) What age do you think he asks/spells like?

You can post your answer as follows RealAge/ActAge.
Example

156/182 (just random numbers)
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You can think I'm wrong, but that's no reason to quit thinking.

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Comments

Suicizer | 2010-03-30 10:11

im actually wondering why someone wants to put such content on quadropolis, just about 1 person :P.
are you fasinated by chasester :P?

Windecker | 2010-03-30 13:25

Perhaps not so much fascinated, but he is one of the members who does decent fair job of standing out to just about everybody.

Suicizer | 2010-03-30 13:43

it looks like this person (william_shakespare) actually is a newcomer or just someone that has 2 accounts, because the account has been created just 5 and a half hour ago...

Windecker | 2010-03-30 13:51

Or perhaps he has just been following the forums and posts without an account and decided to say something. Why don't you ask him?

Suicizer | 2010-03-30 14:04

doesnt sounds very logical to me to follow forums without having an account...

William_Shakespeare | 2010-03-30 18:44

If you have nothing to say why create an account? it's superfluous.

Suicizer | 2010-03-30 20:59

to upload contents maybe? :P

William_Shakespeare | 2010-03-30 18:55

Why do you have four books of ancient biography on one man in the era of late antiquity? Because that one man fascinated enough people to create an uprising and legacy.
I think in the light of Chasester's abuse of grammar, popularity, and critical nature of maps, it would be good to guide him to the path of intelligent thinking, and proper rudiments.
Though he might not be deserving of four books, no not even one, he deserves at least a paper or two dedicated to improving the legacy and image of himself. [sarcasm].

MeatROme | 2010-03-30 20:22

I really approve of this whole posting!
Even if picking out one person in particular might give that person (more) ideas above their station (as shown in here, in fact) the general information contained pertains to anybody contributing on quadropolis!

FYI: If his (Chaseter_aka_you) behaviour does not improve till the end of the week his account will be banned by me.
Fellow admins: please contact me if you disagree ..
.. but even the few morsels of acceptable (or maybe even good (I only know of one though)) community interactions can't excuse the pain/effort he causes us all.

William_Shakespeare | 2010-03-30 21:08

I really don't want to see Chasester banned, so please elaborate by what you mean by "behavior", and the litmus test that will be used to evaluate said behavior.

Suicizer | 2010-03-30 21:06

you can critic his way of critic, but sometimes, he does gives some good critic to maps, at points that could be improved...
it actualy doesnt matter if you write the grammar in all of your comments wrong, this website isnt existing to teach people english on the right way.

btw is pretty amazing that in a bit more then 12 hours, there have been more then 20 comments on 1 content. i think that deserves something :P *claps in his hands*.

Mysterious | 2010-03-30 12:19

lol but its kind of fun ^^

Zama | 2010-03-30 12:59

D"B..... Today is going to be partly cloudy with William storm off the east coast and a light breezy Chasester winds from the west!
*Z Hops in UFO and flies away*

MisanthropX | 2010-03-30 15:53

i dont agree with the fight youe poeple have but i agree that chasester has too much spare time

Suicizer | 2010-03-30 17:45

lets get a job for him, shall we? :P

Chasester_aka_you | 2010-03-30 19:43

lol

I find this forum post halarious. I check quad last night around 11 and this afternoon there is a new forum post with my name on it. What makes it even better is that there are 11 comment. Im the most famous person on quad. So thank you all my fan, i love you guys too!

I see that no one has tryed to guess my age. O well i guess that will remain a secret.

As for shakespear:
I think your probley some one that made a map that i commented on and it did not go over so well with you, so whatever. If you dont like my style of writing, take it up with my mom, she taught me to write. :) At least you make valid points but i honestly dont care; im at a point in writing were i could careless what you think about it, so whatever.

As for all my fans:
Thanx so much for all the comments on this halarious post, and if one or 2 of you would try to guess my age, that would be great cuz i could get another laugh out of that :)

As always:
YOUR LOVABLE JERK
chasester

skiingpenguins | 2010-03-30 19:59

types like a 5th grader, probably an 8th grader

"Im the most famous person on quad." Hatred causes outcry.

William_Shakespeare | 2010-03-30 20:06

"What makes it even better is that there are 11 comment. Im the most famous person on quad."

--No, more like infamous.

"If you dont like my style of writing, take it up with my mom, she taught me to write. :)"

You mom undoubtedly taught many people to write, and some of them (most likely) turned out great, so look elsewhere for the source of your incompetence.

"At least you make valid points but i honestly dont care"
One who stares logic in the face, and then spits, is worse then a incompetent fool, because in the latter case the individual can't help it.

"Thanx so much for all the comments on this halarious post, and if one or 2 of you would try to guess my age, that would be great cuz i could get another laugh out of that"

This shows you have no intention of being a serious critic, and your only goal is to divide people for laughs. With that said, I'm afraid, I'll have to be the voice of a serious critic around these parts. Resume your game of CandyLand.

Chasester_aka_you | 2010-03-30 20:10

lol I am the worst writer in the world! *bows*

William_Shakespeare | 2010-03-30 20:14

Answer my Comments you weasel!

Chasester_aka_you | 2010-03-30 20:43

"What makes it even better is that there are 11 comment. Im the most famous person on quad." -chase
No, more like infamous. - Shakespeare
Its all in the eye of the beholder :)

"If you dont like my style of writing, take it up with my mom, she taught me to write. :)" -chase
You mom undoubtedly taught many people to write, and some of them (most likely) turned out great, so look elsewhere for the source of your incompetence. - Shakespeare
accually your wrong, me and my brother, same style, homeschooled! :)

"At least you make valid points but i honestly dont care" -chase
One who stares logic in the face, and then spits, is worse then a incompetent fool, because in the latter case the individual
can't help it. - Shakespeare
I dont care not because your point is completely directly in your face, but rather because its a matter of preference. There are many writing styles and i like mine. i am pass the point in life were i have to care so much what others think about my writing style. Otherwise i would take the advise of a real professional not from some random person online that has a personal vendetta against my writing style.
Point being that i dont care because, i dont need to. It is not a fact that i must hang my hat on as essential or even remotely important.

"Thanx so much for all the comments on this halarious post, and if one or 2 of you would try to guess my age, that would be great cuz i could get another laugh out of that" -chase
This shows you have no intention of being a serious critic, and your only goal is to divide people for laughs. With that said, I'm afraid, I'll have to be the voice of a serious critic around these parts. Resume your game of CandyLand. - Shakespeare
Laughter is the medicine for everything. To critic something with all seriousness is fine but people are more open to being criticed if they find it funny. Commedians for example: they make fun of all kinds of things, there no more then critics with the ablity to make you laugh.
As for this post no i would never take it serious. I find is a laughable joke that some noob (or so he claims) is commenting on my writing style. I could careless what you think. If i listen to every bimbo online that told me that something was wrong with something i did then were would i be? A loser?

Overall point is, and i think i stated it like ten times, I DONT CARE WHAT YOU THINK. GOOD JOB THOUGH! At least you were able to clearly articulate your point, cudoes! By the way i thinking that we are overlooking one key factor, you been on O less then a day, and you were able to make a complete anylasis of my writing style, and write a node on it. Im wondering who really spends too much time on it? Unless of course this is your second account, is it?

chasester

William_Shakespeare | 2010-03-30 21:01

["If you dont like my style of writing, take it up with my mom, she taught me to write. :)" -chase
You mom undoubtedly taught many people to write, and some of them (most likely) turned out great, so look elsewhere for the source of your incompetence. - Shakespeare
accually your wrong, me and my brother, same style, homeschooled! :)--chase]

Actually you're wrong. I am your brother, and like you said I am able to clearly articulate my point. :)

"By the way i thinking that we are overlooking one key factor, you been on O less then a day, and you were able to make a complete anylasis of my writing style, and write a node on it."--chase

That would be because I lived with you for about 18 years :)

I had a good laugh, OWNED :)

Chasester_aka_you | 2010-03-30 21:07

lol u @$$hole

SheeEttin | 2010-03-30 21:10

Okay I think you just won this thread.

ANYWAY. All good points. Chasester, I hope you were paying attention.
I've noticed you've been doing a better job at posting, but also try to format your posts to make them readable. Try bullet points. A little more effort.
Also, there were references to you being taught to write. This is not our job, please don't make us do it.

I'm closing this thread now, but let it stand as a reminder that when playing with others, you should make an effort to look & act nice.