An improvement over your older maps, definently. But it is too dark imho, and it only has one spawnpoint. Also don't confuse people by having two versions for download. Just decide if you like the green fog better and stick with that.

The main part of the map is plain and flat. Item placement feels rather excessive+random and there shoulden't be clip on the towers (no I don't like having to jump back down the little hole). Very limited texturing, and the waterfall looks a little weird imho. Also there are too many trees and it looks odd as they are (mostly) all the same model, all placed on level terrain. Does not feel much like a forest for me.

Its about 1.5/10 in my book, but with 5 stars, I will just round up to 2.

Just like we discussed on MSN messanger, you should add 2 bridges so the gameplay will be good in the map. And like Passa said, you can add some more light. But other then that, this is a great improvment over your other maps. So keep going!

actually, i thought the darkness was quite atmospheric, would look better with campfires than those red electric lights...

you might want to add a bridge or 2 or something to improve gameplay, and ammo/health placement needs thinking about.. and un-clip the towers, there is realy no need for the clip. (or you could make it glass, but then you couldn't snipe out of it..

I'm impressed thojoh370. Your map has atmosphere. The towers took me by surprise. I like the forest with the trees you chose. They don't inhibit gameplay but look very nice. I also like the interactive waterfall. Any chance of making outcroppings to jump around on? The mineshaft is cool. I agree with the others about improving the noclip area and using campfires. Bridges would be cool, too. How about some islands? Good job, man. Keep up the good work.

It is a good start, the watchtowers are good, and I liked the passage, but why did you noclip it? =(

It is just too linear and flat for my tastes though. Try to make it look more natural.

Too many trees and only one kind. You were too lazy to add the other vegetation models as well I guess.
The rest of the architecture is just a 10 minute effort.

First, the falls look extremely odd. They stick out of the rock face and are very blocky.
Second, what texture did you use for the rock walls? Apparently, I don't have it. If it's with the map, then it's my fault, I missed putting it in. If it's not, is it packaged with another of your maps that I don't have? If it uses custom textures, they should be included (I think).
Oh, and one more thing: the end of the river is somewhat confusing. Instead of just having it end there with clip, how about the ability to fall off? If not, how about a grille to block people? Just clip can be confusing.