Ive seen that version 1.0 was really unready to relase at quadro.
So i deleted it and started up with version 1.1 now .

The next time i´m working on a race map called street (dont know if i´m able to finish) and off course on
VERSION 1.2

I try to practice mapping as often as i am able to, because i got catched by building maps.

Maybe you´re able to give me some more tips to increase my "mapping-quality"

put variety on light sources. and do not litter white lights, white lights make the map looking unfinished and washed out.
and one single radar tower wont enhance your design, its only 1 element.

which doesnt mean now you should spam that :P try to build up style fitting elements as surroundings.

something that aspiring level designers forget is that there are not onl walls. there is the floor, the walls, the ceiling, well in your map there is no ceiling but well, there are couple ways to put light.. not only on the floor..
also the particles are rather crappy, they look random and are very unreal for me, without source, or logical idea behind it.
rather use particle 4.
but well, i prefer to never use particles on quads or healthboosts or other weapons.. give it a special place, but dont overdo the place where you put it..

your map still looks like a box. and the mountains are cutted off cruely

dont put quad healthboost and yellowarmor soo near to each other.. you can get all three in a short run (7 seconds)
thats unbalanced and can really destroy the balance and make players frustated playing the level. balance the map item placement

lights on stairs are overused,
and do not use 45° slanted geometry, it makes thing looking not really stylish or cool

dont make your mountains cutted off on 1 height.. build variations in height and make them go further away if you care about the atmosphere.
let the map look like its a real world.. and not like it were built only for the players on it

There are 3 things in this map that I would like to see.

1) Difference from teleport and teldest. (Or 2 teleport like in Tartech).
2) Some jumppad from the floor to the upper construction.

3) More life (and in a different part of the map) and maybe one or two only more ammo.

The blue particles for the minigun is useless (for me), maybe you can found a better textures and add some particles (like 4 0 250 0xF00) to the quad.

In the end the map is nice. So 7 is ok if you fix the teleport!

Thx Drekow (i love your hostility pack , but i dont like the glass on it ^^)
i will try to do this !!

Thx for this helpfull comment

A new version is online now !!
Check it out

lol sry i am using the solaris hudguns so i dont see if they are in the wall or not ^^

do not spam particles, place them where they cann add to the environment/immersion, a blue particle in a random glass box can break the atmosphere

i deleted this ugly cave , sorry ^^