interresting map, looks very nice gj!
actually got nothing to say about anything exept theres a strange bumpmap/texturelayerbug above the lower teleport, on that small open concrete balcony (next to the plants). this counts for the greenish bricktexture in the water to. this bug is behind some teleports to.

theres a geometry mistake in the middle of the map at the 1st floor close to the bullets, between the way to the greenarmour and a playerstart.

theres a texture mistake on the 2nd floor, just above the greenarmour. the edge is "grassy" textured, while the rest of it is just metal.

at the teleport on the 2nd floor, theres floating a teledest with no teleport ported to it.

another points is those jumppads that u added, why not just 1 jumppad with entset: 19 -5 (or 20 -5)? if u hit the jumppad and wont move at all, you land perfectly on the floor above. i kinda dislike the jumppad battery :S.

is there a reason all chalk filled holes in the map are clipped, but at the yellowarmour it isnt (could be the flow of course) :P?

ill give 8 points to it...

hm for your first map its not that bad..
the layout is a bit too small in my opinion, and you shouldnt spam that much mapmodels, also the pillar is annoying,, i often get stuck there..

you can get stuck on the side of the stairs, noclip or delete.

there are way too much teleports for such a small map (4!)

the playerstarts are placed very unfair.. you either spawn in a corner or at yellow armor

the lighting is on some spots too dark and could have been improved.
white light makes the map looking undone.

also i cant understand why you put these explosion particles at open walls

weapon placement is imbalanced aswell
riflerounds - 1
rockets - 4
bullets - 2
grenades - 2

4 rockets?
too much for a dm map in my honest opinion

the clip on top is bad.. you cant riflejump without jumping against the ceiling > outch

another thing is that new level designer spam mapmodels, not that mapmodels are bad but 43 mapmodels are a bit too much for this small dm.

design: there are no surroundings which would make the world believable or authentic

Mmmm how long i wait it, but it true about textures, models and cliping. Somewhere was quake retexturing project, you can take that textures, think their license allow it. Dont listen pople who talking about change map gameplay :)

Thanks for the comments.

suicizer - I agree the map models looked retarded (my WIP version never had them :) The beta just needed something to show there were lights. Thanks for pointing out the geometry bugs, I was glancing right over them. The jumppad 'battery' will probably change -- I cant really figure how to change the "boing" sound in the config!

misantropx - How is 4 rockets too much? A few maps in the distro have approximately the same ammount.

diGruve - I think thats where the gibbie package comes from?

I can do all that from a map config? Does the boing_x sound get reverted back when the map changes, or something?

As i said, I may change the jumppads instead. The original map had a trigger_push or whatever that prevented the player from going down the jump path. Might not really affect gameplay at all if i take the jump pad battery away.

Updated.

Is there anyway to override a map model cfg in a map.cfg? I'm having issues with the dcp/bulb models rendering with ambient 30 when if glowmodels is 0 (looks ridiculous).