still very original design, i keep liking it :)!

the map uses many quake textures, so i suggest you experiment a little with offset and texrotate to get some textures to fit places where nothing can. for example that big diagonal column could use a 128x64 horizontal texture to give a nicer effect. It looks weird as it, with that texture on top, "cutting" it in pieces while the side texture gives the idea that its one piece of metal, and not many.

Sometimes an artist continues to paint on an already-finished work, and in the hopes of fixing a small error, they must throw out the whole work. This is the case here, I think.

The original of this map, as I remember, was industrial, mechanic, and strong. You've kept a lot of the girders and such, but you added a bunch of things to clash with the original theme and completely remove any authenticity it had. The texscroll lights on the floors are sci fi and weird and cool. Use them in Devastation. The map was built for that theme. This one wasn't. In bringing this map to the present, much of the value it had in the past was lost. The scrolling textures on the walls are also weird. I dislike them - they serve no purpose, except maybe as a distraction.

I like the atmosphere created in the middle with the various pipes all in different directions. It's chaotic and has a lot of depth. In terms of gameplay I'm not sure how well it will work. I could be wrong. And for artistic purposes, again it's not very industrial anymore. I might be wrong, but crossbeams are not meant to be curved.

Finally, the death pit needs to be fixed. Put death in there so people die within a reasonable period of time. Also if you're going to use a rock texture you really should heightmap it so it's not flat.

And shame for removing CTF!

Anyways, there are some improvements here but I can't say I like the re-invention. The original was flawed, yes, but it did not need a complete revamp.

i like the mix out of mitaman and gibbie

but there are some design issues.

kretren is true, there are too much glow tex on the walls for a more "industrial" theme.
and too less light on the floor light emitters

i like the middle,even if the lower bars are make me often stuck.
there could be more surroundings, better mountains etc.

But i totally like the inner of the map, sauer got no gibbie capture map yet i think,
especially the hole with the yellow armor and the base.

You forgot too many lights.. especially at the detailed support bars
everywhere in the inner of the building.
(i mean the green scrolling tex, its not lit anywhere)

i personally like lower death.. it gives you the oppurtunity to type /kill to be faster.

another issue is the dead end at the teledest.

hmm i am dreaming :P
Really nice maps, because

+pretty cool design
+nice mixture between the textures
+a lot of ways
+a lot of hides
+lovely lights

-a little bit too cracy :X

All in all i am dreaming of this map the whole day
8/10 !!! Great work

after loads of game here i can be sure that this map not only is fantastic but also, work well. You have to learn it!

thank, you gave the name of the map templation :)

Nice map. Why CTF is removed ?

I'm not sure that the layout is better now.you have done a lot of enchantment on the map. And they are fine. Also the 2 flag seems at looks more balanced and the path clearer and faster... but i regret the old map. Hope i can forgot my words.