well...
- you didnt have to include my skybox in it,
- you didnt have to put the mapname in the mapshot 'cause sauer automatically puts one there,
- your lighting is boring,
- i like the layout.

i agree the lighting is boring... very.... gray
and a few parts look copied from complex
i do like the "ribs" look u have going in a few places, the trim on the map is very nice.
change the brown platform texture on the top and sides. make them different. why else would trim go there?
as i said before, lighting is very important. light it up more. use different colors and shades. make it stand out.
3.5/5 so far :P

.- you didnt have to include my skybox in it,

- Why?

.and a few parts look copied from complex.

- where? .-.

your Comments motivate me to create more maps >.

hm.. the map has not really flow.. and it is a bit complex. also the lighting (someone already said) is boring.. only white lights look boring, and makes the map looking undone.
also think about what some materials cause.. like reflection.. you could make your lights look like they are reflecting the water (so place lights near water)

i would place some non-mapmodel lights like tech1soc lights.. (not only on the ceiling)

your map seems again like the complex mod, that there is not really a light source on some places.. like the canals, the rooms etc.

a map should be lit by more then the ambient and skylight lights.
i would set ambient to 10 and do the rest with lights.

Layout - the layout is bit bad, and looks on some places weird like in the garden (ladder up,.... ladder down.. wth?)

also those curved "pillars" are blocking the flow.. on the platform and on the ground.

and boxes: never place boxes without a reason. (a good example is memento, every box has it own reason to get from point a to b)

on your map you cant use those boxes. they are just blocking the way/standing arround without a use.

another thing is this door near the tech1soc "electro"-texture.
its blocking too.
upper area is too open

boost pad - one is jumping too high.
the other one is too low or too strong, so you jump against the wall..

boost pad platform - wth, 2 jumppads to it? (2 jumppads in combination are bad - e.g. jump so you can jump)

canals - one way base (only teleport leading to outside, might be good idae for emergency exit, but i rather defend then escape with my life)

2 bases are too open, especially the one on the stairs.
(never make bases see other bases)

the base with the open window - another 1-way base (one way in/out only)

at the wheels - floating screw

overall too many bases i would say.. spread 5 bases on the whole map.

Maybe more differents textures can be better.
No spawn in others mode (like insta, ffa)
But good work, continue !

I personally liked this map and disliked it at the same time.

It looks a lot like a map that T-chen made that I lauded, so maybe that's why I like it. The windows are similar, as are the garden worlds that you chose to include.

The lighting is very poor in this map. You've already got gray textures everywhere so why not use lights to make the map pop?

The layout was both poor and good. I liked that it went into various places of interest and really explored the city concept. The sewer, storage containers, and buildings are all interesting.. However that's also the problem. There are a lot of dead ends with long paths going to them, making this map useless for game modes outside regen and also damaging the gameplay in regen. I would like to see this more ctf-compatible.

The platforms at the top level are far too high for easy use. There are jumppads and staircases but they're in select locations.. And the boxes, although stacked, are still useless because they're often not high enough to climb onto the next platform.

You took some abstract concepts and put them in what is, hopefully, a realistically-themed map. The curved architecture, the weird things sticking out of the buildings, those all look weird. I like the white complex-ribs, though, oddly..

Cut the dead ends, lower the high platforms, and reduce the abstract architecture (including those jumppads.. maybe put fans under them to make them more realistic). Improve the lighting and noclip the windows.

3/5 but it could be 5/5