not that you put no effort into this, but the map doesnt flow that good,
you can jump against ceiling/doorboarders. etc

also there are many one way bases (grenade spam > dead)
the upper stage is everywhere too dark.

but i like the textures, even if they are simple :P

and dont forget to delete the mac files in there. (DS_STORE etc)

nice map, seems to be pretty original!
the geometry isnt bad, but sometimes a bit strange.
the textures are gr8 :D even they are pretty simple.
the lightning isnt good, its at the roof far to dark at some places. maybe u should increase the ambient, because ambient 1, is very low.
the gameplay isnt very well at all. plz check noclipping and clipping again for sure. further, i dont c much logical in the map. there are some dead ends (never add dead ends into a map!
the flow isnt good either, because u bump much to doorways, fall into holes even u cant c there r, etc.

anyways, not bad map, but really improve it.

ill give 30 points for it (10 points originality, 20 points textures).

I'm not sure what I should do for the dead ends, though. Should I use teleports for easy escape, or make new halls and have two ways to get into each dead-end?

Hehe I actually really liked this map! The texturescroll works really well, and the flow wouldnt to bad IF you add some noclip to those ennoying doorframes (think its already been mentioned. The roof indeed is waaaay to dark, you cant see where u running. Game Designers usually use a simple trick of using lighting where points of interest are (on the rooftop the entry to downstairs would be a great example to put a light so ppl know theres something there.

Appart from that in this map the dead ends didnt really disturb me thaat much because they dont go in to deep, its sorta more like a quick step in and out to get something.

Otherwhise keep the simple rule of that there sould always be two ways in and out and youll be fine for gameflow.

TIll now 3/5 because gameflow is very bad due to no no-clip, and lighting is very bad. Change these few things and my rating will rise ;)

Cheers K1

Can I use your texures for a map I'm making please?