very nice. with the enhanced texture pack of tech1soc it looks even better! although i found a lot of tiny mistakes, where some of them should be repaired soon while others are hardly noticable

A description of the mistakes may be helpful :P
Jon Limle

well, most of the entities are not precisely placed. Not to mention those shotgun shells in the ground
and there is a minor fix that noone would notice. Some geometry at the outskirts of the map is not merged with the round column, leaving a tiny gap within.

And the lighting seems a bit too much, this skybox gives out a more dark theme. But i believe the map is fine as is :D

interesting map, u used techsoc1 textures as a primairy texturetheme, pretty original!
the lightning isnt very well, because its seems its comin from everywhere (far 2 bright for such a skybox), maybe u should put the skylight a bit lower (it already fits much better to the skybox with skylight 40 60 80, and the other lights get more sense because of that).
the geometry is good.
the texturing can be done better. not that uve gotta move to another texturetheme, but just can be textured with some other textures of the same theme.
the detailing can be done a bit better 2, but thats partly because of the textures.
the flow is very good, i think u shouldnt adjust it at all.
the gameplay isnt that good yet because some pickups still has 2 be adjusted, but i think ull get there ;).

anyways, nice map! plz fix those points...
ill give 70 points for it.

A good start to a map and I can see lots of potential.

My big complaint is the texturing, which I really dislike. I find the main texture, the grate thing, to not fit in well with all the places it is used and I recommend switching it to something else. Also, the color scheme consists of only brown and black, making the map unattractive overall. I would try using textures with more contrast, even for something like a metal city, or using different lighting colors.

Appart from that, if the bugs are fixed and the other poster's comments are considered, then this could be a good looking and fun map. I like some of the concept that are displayed and I would enjoy to see this map completed.

great map actually!

version 1.1- made skylight match the skybox better
*later on will be making a few more fixes*
Jon limle