Very good for a first map! I like the way you engineered the jumppads and tubes. For some reason it's not confusing at all lol. A few suggestions on how to improve though. first off the map is kinda plain. it's polished, but the bare walls and lack of texture variation take a toll on the overall feel of the map. consider adding more tubes on the wall or break it down some and leave a little rubble on the floor. The map also feels like a box. true, you are in a box but there are ways to hide that. consider adding another building or level to the map. And maybe putting something in the background, like industrial buildings or something.

anyway, that's my two cents
3/5
hope to see more!

AGREED WITH justin !! Pretty good for a first map

1)you Need Better layout | -3
2)Nice Textures | +2
3)details | -1
4)Too open | -2
5)Good Theme and Idea | +2
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TOTAl | 3/5

I will DISAGREE with justin. The pipes are confusing. First off, there's no indication that by touching one you'll be teleported and then put into a jumppad.. Nothing. It's a solid object. Furthermore the texturing is pretty poor on the map.. The pipes specifically look weird. And the lighting doesn't help much either. You have it far too harsh; tone the color down a bit. The map's also quite small so the jumppad-teleport combo, I think, would make the movement far too fast. Maybe I'd be wrong..

But this is way better for a first map than mine was :P You're probably going to come up with some really creative stuff in the future.

I say 2/5.

nice first map posted on quadro (even im sure this isnt ur really "first" map ever made, what would be even better ;P)!
the geometry is pretty good, u know pretty good how 2 trim edges.
the clipping/noclipping can be done better (like some trimmed edges r noclipped, and some arent) but i dont mind keeping the sidewalls of the map unclipped (makes it pretty nice 4 trickjumping 2 :D).
the detailing isnt very well, u could add particles to some tubes (maybe even mapmodel 158 and/or 159), but a ventilationshaft would be nice 2.
the gameplay can still be confusing, because some tubes there r teleports and teledest close 2 it, but some arent (maybe u could try to add a different texture or different shape to the teleport/teledest tubes, or to the no-teleport/teledest tubes, so the gameplay gets easier, and increases because u have 2 think less where u gotta move).
i think it would be more realistic to if u make that the tubes arent "pasted" with some kinda glue to the building, but r really comin out of the building.
further, i think this is more some kinda industrial theme, with a mario-touched gameplay (because of the tubes of course :P).

anyways, nice map! keep going like this!
ill give 60points 4 it.