Hey Doko,

I think the basic idea is nice. However there's a few things that dont fit yet. The torches the particles come out the bottom (not bothering gameplay, but it'd just be more estethic if they wouldn't), you've also used bumped textures and flat textures, chose if you want to use bumped or nonbumped.

There's a spawn point right in front of a GA, very bad idea ;) The health boost room is terrible too, you got 2 healths, 1 health boost, 4 pump ammos, 4 rocket ammos, and that room is like 10 meters away from the YA... Whoever gets that will instapawn everyone ;) that's my personal no-go on this map.

I like the idea that you can climb on the walls. That gives you an awesome position against the people on the ground level. Also the YA being in the middle I like, because that makes it a little harder to get as everyone will be shooting at you ;)

The corridors inside are ok, but there's not a whole lot of reason to walk them, as most of the action plays outside, as well as most the ammo being placed outside. Nevertheless it makes the gameflow good, as you always have 2 ways to get somewhere.

I dont know if that's a mistake on my machine, but the skybox isnt found that you used... U might wanna double check that.

Other than that Im sure you put some work in this map and I hope my comments could help!

Cheers K1P57A

Good idea, sloppy execution.. Really sloppy..

The cliffs can be climbed on.. That's fine I guess but there's one spot where you can climb all the way in to be completely concealed. Also the cliffs, for this size of map, use too large a gridsize. They look really blocky. And there are several parts (especially at the tower) where they're not smoothed off at all.

The crate textures are really blurry.. Maybe think of using different ones? Also they aren't blended well with the ground. They look as though they 'sunk' in. Try to make the ground more bumpy looking around them. The ladder isn't blended well with the roof, is there a way to fix that?

You have a grass texture on the staircase leading from the grassy area.

The part with the GreenArmour could be improved. The red 'carpet' texture could be curved to match the wall rather than being abruptly chopped off in a rectangular fashion.

Ammo placement is horrible.. You have at least 10 rockets lying around, 4 of which are so close they're merging almost.. Same with shells. Try to tone them down. Rockets should be 1-2, MAYBE 3 especially on a map as open as this. And add variety in weapons.

Good job making the map not seem symmetrical by using landscape.. It took me a while to realize. Still.. Really? Symmetry? On a DM map?

Overall you have some good ideas and it looks okay. The curvy ground at the YA looks cool for example.. But you really should step back and look at the map before submitting it. The things I mentioned were picked out within minutes.

3/5