The map is lacking in space in the hallways and in other areas... you need to make sure there is jumping space... cuz every one jumps like monkeys ... and that there is a clear path to every object in a room... some times it is ok to leave limited amounts of space to get to an object... especially if that object is not important ... otherwise an ampule amount of space is required... the map layout is alright you have one group of hallways that connect to too man rooms the hanger and some other room with a plane in it ... there is only limited number of entrance into the other room... one i think... which is the only entrance onto the second floor of the hanger also ... the weapons are way too much ... i played with 32 bots ... and i could always find some ammo ... health is a lil lacking ... which is ok... but u should add some more ... the texturing is great and the map architecture is very uniformed.. so good job

u need to work on space on your next map and learn the correct amount of weapons and health u need on a map...

chasester

Looks pretty good except for the light texture you used repeatedly in the hallways on the ceiling. Try spacing the lights out a little more. Otherwise I think that's about all I noticed except for what chasester said.

3/5 keep it up =)

Hey Falco,

All in all I dont find the map to be all that bad... Altho I'd say it would rather go towards an artistic attempt rather than a DM map. Corridors are to narrow and Weapon placement is off and to many paths end in a dead end...

To change it to a DM map Id have following few ideas:

1. Put it all to one level, perhaps only 2 stairs to reach the hangar or something, keep the flow circular, no dead ends

2. To make it more "spaceship like" use more diagonals. Less cubic building, that also helps the flow of the game

3. Weapon placement, put fewer weapons but better placed

(ps I have a bug with the skybox when I look out through the glass window where the fighters fly, maybe thats just me, but check it out again)

All in all not badly made, and I think the space ships are awesome!!

Cheers, K1P57A

.. it's mostly been said: lacks space for real multiplayer fun .. might do better as a SP map really.
Actually I found the klaxon to be really annoying and the geometry anything but friendly .. it's all done with a lot of love to detail, but sadly this isn't what makes and/or breaks a good multiplayer map - see above - more appropriate (IMHO) for a single-player mission .. which would hopefully turn off that damn klaxon A.S.A.P.!

srry but i think the light is a bit very bright for a spaceship with an alarm screaming around all the time (u would think more when u hear an alarm about dark chambesr, with only red light from the alarm...

anyways, keep it up!