I've played your map and I actually think it has a lot of potential, but you have a lot of work to do still.

Textures are really repetitive, try to vary them, add detail in the borders of everything, especially stairs that have the same texture as the floor, you should give them some border texture, and make 'em a little larger, (1x1 isn't really good for deathmatch). Those huge pipes could use other texture as well, ceramic isn't suitable for pipes :\.

Apart from that, you should add more detail and some more lights, it's pretty dark in there.

Try those things if you wish. Good work.

This map looks really unfinished, especially when you view it from edit mode. The jumppads need something more than a raised square to be obvious, and some parts are really hard to navigate. Also, it looks like you made the whole map with the smallest grid size. Use the largest you can get away with, then work your way down.

"ONE SHOT, ONE KILL"
-Official Motto, U.S. Army Sniper Reg.

Version 2 of Fraggingyard is up for your fragging pleasure. Features;

-complete texture and light overhaul
-brand new textures available for any project
-calclight -1 to accomodate slower systems

There are alot of twists and turns to keep you on your toes, but there are just as many open areas. Just when you think you know the map there is a secret to be discovered.

I've downloaded again the new version, and the same errors I've pointed are still there. Stairs shouldn't be 1x1, make em 1x2 or 1x3, they should also have a diferent texture than the wall or the floor. The pipes still are bad textured, some textures are cutted by half, and also theres a place that has a sign texture everywhere.

Also, I don't know if so much fog was your idea, but you can reduce it by adding "fog xxxx" to your .cfg file.