It was fun to work on this. :D

map needs more weapons before it is playable.

You should try to put at least 2 of each type of weapon on a map, otherwise it is just too difficult for players to get weapons.

Also, not keen on the amount of jump pads

nice map :D, but there are some points that ruin that comment =s.
first of all, plz dont add ur name that big and sightable into the map. use /maptitle instead.
when i was testing the map with theso, i found out u can easily jump to the place with the names of creators written in it, so u should clip better (that cardridge is actaully not very usefull at all, so maybe u should just clip those windows ;P).
further, i agree with nail, it needs more wepons, make that every weapon got at least 2 supplys.

the flow of the map seems to be pretty good so nothing about that ;D.

lightning is nice 2, same 4 detailing.

so only fix those points, then the map is pretty good 2 play :D!

70 points 4 now

Excellent sound effects! I like the effect it has on the map. =) I'd have to agree with theso though about the jumppads. However, you could change the texture to something more fitting for the map and leave them, or you could add ladders or ramps. IMO

3/5

Did you actually download the map Sui? I actually fixed that a while ago... You played on an older version with Theso.

Lol theso.

The screenshot made the map look a lot better than it actually is, at least for me. The layout is pretty basic and I don't really understand the glass barrier. How, in a broken-down, old castle, would a glass barrier exist? It doesn't make sense, and it barely performs a function. I think it'd be better to have a rope bridge going across and just have the rest open space so you can jump down.

Also maybe consider putting a turret or something in there just to make it look better. Like, place it outside of where players can get to it; it exists there only to add atmosphere.

The jumppads are okay.. That's about it.. They look kinda awkward but they're creative of course. Jumppads like that don't ruin the theme because they are, by definition, sci-fi and futuristic. Maybe change how they look.

Also I guess this whole map could have easily been accomplished with half the height. The jumppads are strong so you use them to launch the player really high, but if you made the map half as high and the jumppads half as strong the result would be more playable, like wake5.

3/5; good atmosphere but a few things break the illusion. Plus a few technical things I mentioned.

The glass, for me, makes the map look unrealistic. When i think of a castle, i dont think of walking on glass. I agree that something other than glass would be more fitting.

Download the new update people! We put in hours of work improving the map with your suggestions. Let us know what you think, and update your rating!

The map is really nice, but i'll talk for some things that i'd like to see done :D
1) change the JPG extension to jpg ;)
2) use a bit smaller fire particles for the custom torches you made
3) there are some broken tiles here. why not add some more tiles on various places around the map to spice things up a bit? :D
4) Detail but.. where do the entrance bars come from exactly? they just pop out of the ground? :P and why not add a tree or 2 outside at the areas which can be seen from within the castle?
5) there are broken floors, but no debris?
6) there a small area high where you can rocketjump and climb it up, but there is nothing there to get. either make it more accessible or clip it out

apart from all these, the map is great so far, 4/5 :D

edit: also there is a common "bad thing from my view" that almost everyone does. The bot waypoints are all flat, which means they only jump if they have to climb. try running again the map, this time jumping, and remember to count falling off (not outside!) a floor to a lower one. that will make gameplay with bots more interesting and realistic other than having them just running left and right without jumping up and down :D

edit2: the bots can't trickjump (can they?) so now yellow armour for them ^^

Well it is better now. The upper level looks a lot better. The YA is accessible to AI by the way, as a stray brick to the side allows for two normal jumps to reach it.

The broken blocks aren't done very well though. They look more torn rather than chipped. And the holes in that one crate look like someone punched it.. If this were reality the holes would coincide somewhat with the lines in the wood so I'd change that again.

And yeah, the lack of debris when so much is broken is a little weird. I'd add some.

Nice details but I don't like gameplay..