This map is nice. Though I gotta say it's a wee bit big.

Thanks for the comment! =) anyway I can improve?

it seems to be a gr8 map :D!
the detailing is nice, lightning is natural to exept the water is a bit 2 much lightblue, maybe u should make it a bit darker. texturing is fitting,
but the gameplay, i dunno =s.
the flow seems to be good, but the bases are very vurnable for enemy fire, what makes the map not much fun to play if u die all the time (so, just try to get a more covered spots for the bases).
the flags are a bit strange placed to, like the flag in the room just be4 the 10+ waterhole (pretty strange 2 that 1 team gets 10+ all the time, and the other doesnt =s).
more clipping isnt neccasery, because u can get everywhere, but those places doesnt make much sence.

anyways, nice map! just improve those points, then i think it would have a nice chance 2 be in next release :D!

90 points for now.

very nice... but
1) no clip to keep you from going outside the map boundaries?
2) a non deleted cube where the sunlight is supposed to be

its a very nice map but there is repetiveness and no real scenery, and maybe make some coverause the place is pretty empty

Thanks! I'll get to work as soon as I can. =)

I'm not sure if the clipping around the borders would be a good thing or not. On the one hand, if you wanted people to get across easily you wouldn't have the walls there in the first place. On the other, one flag is in an area exposed on the top so this will likely lead to people jumping in to get the flag. While this may even out the potential unbalance (this flag has 2 exits while the other flag has like.. 4.. also this flag has the HB beside it), it's not really fair to have the flag so exposed in a way that the team can't defend against. After all, how can you see others coming if they're jumping down a hole in half a second?

Having said that, you should probably clip the walls up so people can't jump the gap, and so they can't run across the map. Still I can see why you wouldn't use it. Also: if a person should fall off the wall they can simply hide behind it. I can foresee this being a flag-camping problem.

The one flag (the one close to the HB) is a little unbalanced as said, but maybe with playtesting I could be proven wrong.

Anyways I still love this map. The theme is cool, the Gibbie texture set is used creatively, and the layout is really cool. I disagree, the map doesn't seem empty at all. There is a unifying theme without repetition. I guess consider putting a few cliffs up just for looks. That could help. Besides that there honestly isn't much you need to do.

5/5

I looked at the map and it is amazing.
Great detail,
Consistent style
Variations in environment
Great lighting
Weapons plentiful but not overpopulated

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The teleport by the one flag is questionable. Through the teleport it takes me under 7 seconds to reach the opposite base, while it takes me almost 15 to return to the base from the opposite.
I advise moving the teledest or adding another pathway.

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I think this map should be absolutely perfect for deathmatch or team deathmatch.

I'm actually really hoping to see this in the next release.
=D Keep up the good work.

near flag 2 there is a wall which used the brown metal and its misplaced, i can't really explain, but search for that and fix it :)

I mean giant mountains and natural landscaping to spice it up, like in Shipwreck or Flagstone how they use huge mountains everywhere. You don't need to do it to the same extent though, or not at all; just a suggestion.