MUCH better than before. MUCH BETTER.

Here are a few problems I noticed:

-there's this one part where you can walk on a rooftop. There are shells on this platform. Nearby there's a hole you put in the wall that should be clipped.

-Also in this area there's a hole in the clipping so you can climb out and run along the 'pyramid' structure outside. I doubt this was intended.

These would be easier to show you if I knew how to put pictures in my posts (or links to them) but image hosting sites are a nuisance..

-You have a line of torches and they're all set in jagged looking blocks. If you don't know what I mean, they're in one corner and the healthboost is under them. The jagged blocks look like they were broken, not a design, and since they're all uniform it looks weird. I'd make them simpler. Also the particle used for the torches is a little big. Finally, you have so many of them it looks artificial. Maybe cut the number in that corner in half. Elsewhere the torches are fine.

-finally there's one corner that should be clipped. You clipped off this trim high up in the walls as the wall is pushed in there, but in one corner the wall curves and there's no clip. So a rocket jump can get you a sniping spot. It's over one of the teleporters.. I hate describing things.

The map is very rich-looking. When I first got in I was impressed. You had planks of wood, stray bricks, and broken floors everywhere and it was multi-layered and interesting. The strange architecture is more limited than the last which is good, but you kept some so it's interesting. The lighting makes the map very nice. It's sorta dim and gloomy, yet warm. I like that you did put motivation to get to the top levels while making it hard to get there. I'm not sure if a quad would be good there or not..

Anyways, my small details are important but I won't lower the mapscore.. 5/5

Nice mapping, but gameplay limited...

the map is good, but! imma talk about the problems
1) the stairs next to the oval-shaped wall holes have a small cube glitch
2) a lot of fire particles aren't in the correct position, neither are the right dimensions
3) use entselsnap (6) for placing accurately all entities... they are all way offset :P
4) there are a lot of weird lightmaps all over the map. i suggest finding a way to fix them
5) revise your materials (clips noclip) because you have a lot of mistakes everywhere in the map!

3/5

Good duel map

But:

little problem to access on one great part of the roof (sry but i cannot descript wich one - bad english :) )
-> put another access simple to evoid camping.

i don't really like the teleport way (like tartesh) --> but this is more personnal

the map seems to be lots improved at detailing and lightning, gj :D!

but the gameplay keeped pretty the same, with still the same problem u cant get 1/2 of the ammo easy, without a riflejump (the riflejump isnt the problem, just that u gotta do it is a problem =s).

i would say, to improve the gameplay by making its easier 2 get 1/2 of the ammo.

another thing: nice bricktexture on below :P (same 4 the water below :P).

anyways, nice map, keep improving it! 70 points for now.

I don't see why every time you make a new version of this map you need to post a new node.

moving on there are still a fair few problems with the map that limit game play and ability.

The main problem is that you've put too much detail into making it look like a run down tomb (or whatever) and the edges and obstacles in the map make game play very cramped and obstruct flow.

Because of the nature of the map it is hard for players to really take advantage of and dominate the map, there are too many limitations. I particularly dislike the stairs that go past the HB and jump between the YA spot and the upper area of the map.

Both of those things have small details that makes the jumps very awkward, costing players precious time.

as far as weapon placement goes the map is unbalanced, due to the difficulty of getting rockets (while in the flow of the map) and the large supply of mg, the map becomes and mg slog out.

Also the textures are too repeated through out the map, making it bleak

2/5