Please use .zip instead of .rar. It's generally convenient.

It's a surprising map, and very interesting new concept. When I seen this map, I wasn't impress, But when I played I have really appreciated !

Sorry for my Fuc*** english but I try.

Heh, gives me a sort of marble-madness feel. You get points for originality and aesthetics from me.

very nice, i love the style of the map and the way it flows, i only have a proble with the quad platform at the bottom...what is it there for?

1: all files, without exeptions, in small letters. the mapfile is named N[...].ogz. it fails for tabcompletion.
2: the map has to be in packages/base in the zip, not in base. This fails for addzip.

Now to the map
I like it, its something unique and i think it has got a nice gameplay because of the glass.

a small bug: you can jump onto the teleport at the lower platform and you wont die.

4/5 or 5/5, i have to look at it again later.

Funny!

nothing more to say.
5/5

srry but here some questions:

what are safty scares?
what is nondeath?

but k, got some more things about the map...

maybe u should add some more contrast in the textures (u added a ligth that make the textures got pretty same colour as skybox, what makes it confusing)

would be nice if some more detail would be added (as example, make the glass isnt on same heigh as the construction material, so a bit trimming would be nice).

the flow seems to be ok, but actualy couldnt say if its playable or not.

1 thing is pretty strange, u added death at the lower platform =s? its not very realistic u die just be4 u reach that platform =s (u cant even get that quad, cause u die if u will take it -.-)

Ok sry for my bad english.

A)
safty scares = safety scares
nondeath = no death
(i edit this on the presentation)

B)
We are actualy works on additions of decors and lightning : 4 brooken tower in glasses with particules into who light the map differently at the cardinal point and some broken pieces everywhere on the structure (all this additions are decorations -> so no playable for the duel).
But it seem that we stop there this map and don't propose a revision 4 with this add (explication of that in point C)

C)
After lot of test with different player and mapper, it seems that there are a lot of problem of confusions (not only cause of the color of the skybox) and excessive fall death. The map seem cool and fun but not really playable for serious duel. We prefer stop revision and start to work on a version 2. Rebuilt all the playable structure more simple and more clear. Delate one floor and make a more close playable structure for exemple. All the amelioration that we are doing actually (towers, broken pieces and lightning effect) will be add on this new version. We will try also in the futur version to reduce the numbers of polygon for better performance on small computer configuration.

Cause of school examination, we propose this version 2 in the begin of september.

D)
The death on the lower plateform is normal and very realist for me, and will be reproduce on the version 2. Did you really think that someone could survive at a fall like this? I put this platefform very very low to try to make this effect of too big fall.

As I find often, the aesthetics of the map are pleasant and in this case original. I particularly like the jump pads and teleports, however making a conceptual map comes at a cost.

The game play of the map is unusual and flow is not very good, when you need to use jump pads so often it slows down the speed and control of the game.

Also because all of the squares are textured the same it's very hard to look at the map and navigate your way to the other side and it will take a long time to learn the teleports.

For these reasons the map doesn't really have potential to be any good for game play, but it's a nice effort and definitely a unique concept

4/5