hehe, not bad, u done something 4 it, i c :P.

but the map still can be better detailed. the toilets r still a bit 2 cubic, same 4 the washtables (u should make them more round). further, i found a light with no lamp (a brightlight, else it wounldnt be that bad). Its behind the wall with that board "no camping" on it (u get pluspoints u used that sign, i h8 campers at deathmatch :P).
further, those locks looks nice :D, i like the doors of it 2.
i c u added a jumppad on that jumpplank (srry if this isnt the right english word, dunno how called in english :P), if u add a jumppad on something like that, make it go more forward, so it looks more realistic (u can use /entset jumppad 0 0 0 0 0 for it and selecting the jumppad of course :P, but u can use the shortkey "." to. u still gotta select the jumppad if u wanna set the jumppad :P).
the maps seems to have a pretty good flow, u dont bump easily 2 things but the gameplay is a bit less. u should add health (not more healthboosts :P)
and remove cartridges, cause they r most times not neccasery in a deathmatch map.

anways, nice map!
10 points for originality, 5 points for own textures, 5 points for lightning/detailing, 5 points for gameplay and 5 points for no-camping sign :D!
so, 60 points!