i like this project, gender Star Wars. Black atmosphère its great ^^

another map :P? u should add contents with a bit more time-delay, else it looks like if u make them very fast and quick, or u just dont got 2 to in rea l life at all =s.
but k, the map.
i think u should try 2 get spacion better first and then start with this. the lightning is original with those projections, even its not a very detailed option of detailing (u actually just increase a detailing by using light and can only make it detailed again by putting /lightdetail on low number and /ambient to. further i dislike the lightning, cause its actualy, just "wrong placed". there are places that got so much light u almost get blind of it, then u appear in dark places, where u cant c much anymore =s. another crucial bad point is, that i found out u used some "bugged" cubes to project lightning into a triangle (thats not bad about it, just the way it has been pasted =s)
detailing, still needs to be done much on it. those leanings of the stairs r a bit big 4 current playermodels :P. like on spacion, u should trim the edges of floors. further it would be nice if there wuold be some dept in textures (thats what a lightning from 1 not-moveable direction bearely can do :P).
texturing, not bad, i like the moving spiral (even tough its an illusion ;D!). u should replace the texture u used 4 the stairs, its not very fitting to this theme =s.
gameplay, the flow isnt bad :D! but same again, u gotta think better where to put pickups and how much u put in that area.
another thing, i think this map is really not ment 4 deathmatch =s.

k, nice map but plz go further with spacion and let this map rest in pieces 4 a while :P. 50 points for it.

pampers, could u please comment on the map its own, not only on the screenshot? further it would be nice if u say why its that good as u say...

Suicizer i made this map since 1 month with a friend Glaedrh... i've made Spacion in 3 day only... sorry this map is very old i think

For one thing it's non-standard to name your files with uppercase letters - TAB completion (when voting for this map for example) won't work until I remember this is the one map that starts with an uppercase "B".
But you definitely need to name the directory-structure inside your ZIP like they're called in the installation - so it needs to be "packages" not "Packages"!

I really like the teleport effect you created and a lot of your geometry is very nice;
but there's tons of boring walls with just the same texture all the time .. and you've used WAY too much light-textures;
like on your steps and definitely in those rooms with all the lights on the floor.
Also - fix the underside of the map .. which architect would place lights to illuminate space below his building? ;-) Think green, man .. stop the wasting of electricity :-P

It's is an instactf map. I don't understand all of you tell, but for textures, yeah I think too.
For "Packages" >>> "OoOoOo Big deal!" It's not important guy!
Your comments are objectives, it's good.
Thank you !

poum, if u created a contect 4 spacion first, then i supposed u made that 1 earlier... :P.
glaer, just do it right next time :P.

Packaging is important so that people know where to put the map and everything else. Upper-case to lower-case may not be a huge difference but basically being rigid about packaging etiquette prevents future nodes from being absolute messes.

As for this map.. Okay. I like the general theme of this map, but you are lacking a lot of fine details (which is a lot to say as you have so many small details...)

First off, the lighting is weird. You have those "stars" of light on the walls and while it's creative I don't know how useful it is. Basically, I question WHY those things are actually there while playing and it ruins the theme for me.

Also you're so concerned about using particles and lights to show the sides there's no subtlety. For example, on this one bridge you have blue particles and red ones, with purple in the middle (showing a transition). What you could have done is made the blue closest to the purple more red, and the red closest more blue, to make the transition less obvious. Right now it looks like a rainbow reject or something.

Interesting idea with the scrolling textures but you didn't need to bloat the packaging with textures that are already in the default packaging like cord1. To make an additional entry in the .cfg you can use the same "picture" twice or more. As for the custom ones you put in they're not that good or useful. I like the rusted metal one but it was applied improperly imo. You used it as a scrolling "liquid" texture and it doesn't look right for that. It's more solid looking.

I dislike the jumppad-teleport combo because it doesn't make sense; you could just use a teleport for its purpose.. But that's just my opinion. Falling down, then getting launched back up quickly, only to be sent to an entirely new spot where I freefall again, disorients me.

There are many dumb details you put in for no reason: Remember, simplicity speaks louder than many details.. Well, maybe not louder, but says something more important. You kept using that light texture on the floor as a pattern and it looks really weird.

The texture (basically one) used on the border walls is really basic. Diversify and use many textures so it's more interesting.

You have far too many colors clashing too. Some places have yellow, red, and blue all in one nauseatingly vivid spot. I imagine you made one side, copied it and reversed it, and then changed the lighting on the new side to the other one (blue to red, or red to blue) but forgot a few.. Actually forgot a lot.. Try to find those and work it out.

If you look up, everything is dark and of poor detail and it looks really strange. Maybe put lights up on there (SMALL ONES) just to make things pop out more.

You used yellow lights.. Why did you do that.. It clashes horribly. Plus there's no subtlety in them; you see this triangular patch of light on the ground that comes from this oddly constructed lamp on the wall and it looks.. bad.

And there's green light in one spot IT ALL CLASHES o_o

Finally, you subbed that lunaran grate texture for your own constructed one.. And right beside the texture it looks unauthentic. I'd remove them altogether.

So... You have good details but far too many and this map has only potential at this point; I look at it and it pops out immediately, but after 20 minutes of picking out details I make a list like this and decide it's horrible. That's something you should be doing; don't submit 3-day projects without first running through and fixing everything, deciding: Would I hate this after 20 minutes?

2/5 (good but far too many details ruin it.. 5/5 once you fix ALL of them)

Nice map, lots of detail, and obviously lots of effort, and I love the layout.
BUT
Im not terribly attracted to the use of the light texture on your little pickup bases.
The packaging should be lower case. I REALLY HATE when I have to go and delete a second packages directory. I makes me not want to try the map at all.

Also. the use of fifteen thousand four hundred and thirty six lights to light up a single ledge is kind of a waste. ( exaggerated slightly )
As Kretren said also, the particles and lighting used clash very much so.

And whats up with the two cubes chalked full of weapons and no exit?