1) bad packaging (follow the packaging guide)...
2) you have spammed the map with ammo/health/armour!
3) pretty plain geometry with absolutely no details anywhere...
4) no eye candy, not even the textures fit!
5) the map actually sucks, i doubt you even spent 1 hour working on it....
6) you should use the MPscreenshot script for taking a proper screenshot without the hud

[censored] i'll give you a 1/5

Censored by Quin: Thank you for at least providing constructive criticism, but please try not to be rude in the process.

This map isn't horrible by any means. It just needs work. I agree, the ammo is in far excess of what is needed. Really you should only have 1-2 of every ammo and they should not be so close together.

Also, lower the invisible blocks with death. It is weird to die immediately after falling off the edge.

The layout is solid for 1-4 players, nothing incredible, but nothing horrible either..

Read the packaging docs to figure out the packaging.. It's not hard. You can usually infer it from looking at other people's maps on here and their packaging.

2/5 for now (that's 10/5 if I could give it such a rating.)

Not fun to play on, but the structure is okay. More detail and texturing and this could become pretty good; work on the ammo to.

There are lots of maps that people say aren't horrible when they are. It's just nicer to not say that. Personally all my maps suck total ass but no one ever told me that until Nieb told me. That's why I stopped mapping total, cuz I figured no matter how hard I tried, I couldn't make a good map if my life depended on it. I even got a map in the release but Eihrul decided it sucked and didn't put it in after all. Personally being an ass about it isn't cool but I would actually prefer it if someone told me my map was horrible because then I could estimate how much work the map needs and how much practice I need. I've always wondered why all of the really shitty maps were rated higher than they should have been. You guys need to be more harsh on ratings :P Seriously it always amazes me when I get screamed at for rating maps so low here (And other places as well). "WHAT???? YOU RATED MY MAP 3 STARS? PREPOSTEROUS! WHO RATES MAPS LOWER THAN 5 STARS ON QUADROPOLIS???" (Note the excessive sarcasm and exaggeration) lol

I agree, that's why I gave it a 2-star rating. 1 star means NOTHING was done properly, but the general details of this map say otherwise. Plus, you consider this guy only made 2 nodes and there was improvement from his first to this one.

Besides, you have to look at the fact that most people are not in denial of the fact that their maps won't be star content/put on the next release; they are releasing maps that they feel are good but may not be great. This map, from this perspective, is not bad. It will never be on a release or star content or be particularly special, but this guy is starting somewhere. With some technical work, this could actually be a 3-4 star map. Never 5 though, unfortunately.

Anyways.

i think this map just needs a bit more detailing, better texturing (u tried well to make with old cube style, but seems ur not ready 4 it :P) and better flow (make u can jump from 1 side to another and (no)clip things...). further, the lightning isnt that bad, even u should make the main light a bit more weaker (in place of 0 200 200 200, somethinglike 0 150 150 150).
btw, u dirty nubcake, u took lightprecision 1 D:! take at min. lightprecision 12 for such a map! (srry 4 bad language, but thats really stupid -.-)

anyways, u got lots of work 2 do yet! :P. wont rate this now, wouldnt give it a good name...